Awesome book with excellent character development..The mc is not overpowered but grows..Keep up the great work.👍👍👌👌

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I  will always love this book no matter how long the author takes her time to write new chapters.

An incredibly engaging novel! The first chapter hooked me instantly, making me eager to keep reading. The dialogues are smooth and well-written, and the descriptions are solid. However, it would benefit from a bit more depth in exploring the characters' emotions and expressions.

Léanlo, es mi primera novela pero le veo potencial a mi parecer.

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Good job author. This is the kind of story i like.Keep up the good work and hope this story will be better and better just like your other story 🥰🥰🥰😆😆😆5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me 😘😘😘😘😘

An absolute tour de force in the psychological thriller genre! From the very first chapter, your novel grips the reader with its intense suspense and masterfully crafted characters. The male lead’s duality is both chilling and mesmerizing, while the female lead’s strength and vulnerability make her incredibly relatable. Even paused at Chapter 25, it’s clear this story is building toward something extraordinary. I’m eagerly waiting for you to continue—it’s truly unputdownable!

this is obviously a translation  no mtl version is available on the net (I checked). since the dude who did it for some chapters dropped I thought why not I try it. so I tried to improve the grammer and shit. leave a comment if you like . and power stones too I guess ??.anyway I'll try to translate as much as I can since iIalso like this and can't read Chinese.

I was impressed by the great world you created. It is obvious that the protagonist will go very high in his cup of power, as the chapters progress. but I hope someone puts it in its place in the future.

It's hard to tell with just 2 chapters. But it seems like this isn't a typical story, a unique story in fact. I can't wait to see where it goes!

Curse you Mars! Now I have to read this fan made story!Oh um, great story so far by the way. It not everyday that you would see a novel that is fan made that actually stay close to the actual novel in term of pacing and character personality.