The Biotech Billionaire’s Forbidden Formula

I really wanted to like this novel but it lost its charm the more I continued to read . I love the starting of the story but somewhere between Ch 150 - Ch 200 I felt so bored reading it so I stopped . I loved the MC because he had the brains and he acted logically , he knew how to survive and was clever but as the story progressed he started to act like other typical novel MCs . His interaction with Yang Xiaoxin just made me cringe , its just a personal opinion but I find Yang Xiaoxin annoying . The way Ren Xiaosu keeps on dragging Jiang Wu and her students around on his escapes is honestly difficult to read . So its not that I hated the story , it's good but I won't be reading further . If you're thinking of reading it go ahead , it's a great novel ,you might enjoy it :)

I think this is a great novel that i would highly recommend, and feel that rhis book should be notIced more so for that im writing This review

I have read a lot of CN novel translations and have become jaded by the recurring tropes. This novel is a breath of fresh air with its easygoing vibe and slight undertone of mystery. Reading a chapter of this is a highlight of my day. So Translators and Editors keep up the EXCELLENT Work!I was sad when the previous translators went MIA and was overjoyed when it was picked up. This story is one of the reasons I am grateful that Qidian started on the translating scene.

Writing is pretty good, the updates seem to be coming out at a regular pace, the story seems to be developping at a good pace as well, I would recommend giving it a look.

Great Story, unique from all points. Having read 112 episodes, I can say that it's a story that's normal at start and fun to read at beginning but it just get better as you read. It's a growth type story in which emotions are slowly grown and make you attached to the story. The more you read it, the more you feel related to the characters in the story, that's just how believable it is. This will be my short review because I don't know what I can say to really better the review. That's all I'll say .I'm still reading and will read it to latest point. I want to say that if there is a loss there is gain then, bear with the dumb moments where mc is doing dumb stuffs like punching tree, or scared of height and later when he learns from his mistake you will feel the gain, the emotions. This makes the story great because only through such naive and negative actions do we realise how positive they are in the end. Thank you for making this great novel. I was just reading the flashback story of Leon, where his mother was killed and he started hating his Dad, without knowing I had tears in my eyes. This is so emotional and that's when I decided that this story is already a diamond in rough.

I've read up to around chap 600 and I definitetly will continue waiting for the updates. I really like this novel, and I praises say it all. However, I wanna leave something that may be of help for the author, and here are a few recommendations:1. The writing could really make use of some editing, such as on some of the common word spellings i.e. "could" instead of "cloud." Also, some words were misplaced i.e. "like sword" instead of "sword like." Another thing would be the lack of "a" and "the" such as in "I am father" instead of "I am a father."2. Pseudo names and/or monikers need mitigation. I feel like frequently using "Young one" or "Snow Beauty" always makes the reader think "Who was that again?" Feel free to use pronouns for I think it will greatly improve the writing quality (and also reduce the time needed to type haha.) If author-san still wants to use the aliases, I would prefer them being used as frequently as the real names in the narration, as that will give us time to imprint the name on our heads.3. Being direct in writing flares up our imaginations more than just leaving it for us to imagine (quite ironic no?) There are times when author-san used  "Obviously you know the reason why!" and I felt nice when I really knew it, but felt frustrated when I didn 't know resulting to me not grasping the events. It may be spoonfeeding, but I think being repetitive sometimes would be a great help.4. In line with #3, the descriptions could really use more specific-ness (And I really like that author-san got better in describing characters in the latest chapters.) The places where the scene happens need a bit more detail such as the color of the room, the placement of the furnitures/obstacles, the POV location, the sights as the eyes extend toward either left or right, etc. You can also utilize mentioning widths and lengths (numbers don't hurt; more so in moderation.) Also you can elaborate on the number of enemies too, and the exact number that died/are left. In terms of describing powers, it can also be a bit useful to use "the shockwave reached 3 kilometers" and the world sizes may also utilize this by comparing to the size of the Earth.5. The world building is a bit confusing for me. It might help by releasing a helpful chapter for the essential information. I still don't understand a few of the power aquisition and improvements up till now (maybe my comprehension is bad too I guess hehe)6. There are a few plotholes, but all stories have them right? Just don't forget what happens to the people/buildings/world around the event portrayed. Don't hesitate to mention how the roof collapsed, how buildings in a 100 km radius got blown, how a lot of people ran when this guy appears etc etc. They really get us to feel the events.7. In line with #6, the R-18 scenes are a little inconsiderate HAHA. There are just times when the MC is walking here then boom the R-18 scenes come and I don't know how the hell they came from the shop to the dark alley.In summary: Don't hide anything from us author-san. Pour everything you imagine into writing. We want to see what you see. We want to know what you know. I f*cking love this novel and I will don anything to help it get even more f*cking good. Love from a loyal reader of yours~P.s. If I have more suggestions, I will reply them here as well :D Keep writing!

The writing and grammar in this story are horrific at best. I thought i was reading a MTL but then i noticed that even those are more comfortable to read then this. I could only  get past 2 chapters and i still have no clue what i just read. the only question i have is what story were the reviewers reading when they wrote there reviews

It’s pretty good, the story moves fast and it’s easy to understand. The only complaint I have is the lack of releases, the releases are very uncommon