This is propably first time where although most chapters are just talking i am not feeling bored and i am excited how will it progress. My english is bad so i can't be sure but i did not noticed any grammar mistakes. 2 MC are really nice and i started to like them very fast. Only thing thats preventing me from giving 5 star is that author stopped updating? I want to know how will happen and how will it continue! =(

Here is my review of The Fool AscensionWorldbuilding: The worldbuilding of this world for me is quite okay as the set up with the heart of ruin and the effect to the rest of the world. I also like there are group of assassins that related with the heart of ruin. My feedback for this, to give more detail description regarding the world itself to make it more fleshed out.Characters: So far the characters are fines and I quite like the dynamic too in here. The main character, Jarek is witty with his delivery. Lena is mysterious and love to give a good roast. Their dynamic between each others so far are interesting and fun to follow. As for other characters, they are okay for now, just needed to be fleshed it out.Writing: I like the writing is quite fast pace, but fine to follow. The action is so far nice too.Overall, if you like action, fantasy, and heist, I definitely recommend this novel.

Shit's peak not gon lie. Workrate's mad hard too, you'd swear bro's locked in a basement😂 Author blink 10 times for an SOS😂Truly loving every minute of this book, there aren't any annoying cliches which is already a win in my book.The story just flows seamlessly.The Author just knows how to write, the story draws you in pretty well.You got a crashout FL who's not annoying and is actually likable. The romance and interaction between the two is a nice.The story is developing pretty well, the characters are well written, the world building is also coming along pretty nice, isn't rushed or anything, and it blends in pretty well as the story is progressing.The MC isn't overly emotional and stiff, he's anMC who's actually fun to follow. A smart MC. I have nothing to complain about.Overall great.

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wow! this piece just cuts it for me! I love the characters, the smooth and easier narrations or descriptions rather make it even more interesting and easier to understand. let's get in there!

The character development in this novel is outstanding, making each moment feel real and engaging. The writing style is smooth, making it an easy yet captivating read. This is a must-read!🤍✨️

The book is really good, simple and easy to understand. Every thing goes well, so a five stars instead. I recommend to read it!                             

It is a good story with good characters and I like the plot line it is catching. Goodluck author as you progress.  This is a book worth reading.

Everything is on point. I had to stop myself just to give a review. There are a lot of things to pick up in this story and the description of characters is just amazing. I'm going to continue reading. Good work author 👌😌

I usually don't read stories like this but it was very interesting. with someone with PTSD should not read something like this because it can trigger but I still like it. So don't give up Author

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