A Nightmare's Diary

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          The writing quality is very good there’s nothing bad I can say about it the problem is that the story develops to slowly if there even is one the main character is going back and visiting all his old companions but because they’re in the story for so short it’s hard to get to know them or even there story           it is a good read if you have a lot of time but if you want action or something with more substance you can skip this one I’m on 50 And I will drop this book but all in all it is a good read

Im currently about 80 chapters in and it feels like the writing quality has gone down a bit after each chapter. Writing quality - 2 -Pretty lackluster, overall "its in english" but the wording could be chosen better to create a smoother sentance. At multiple points the sentences will jar to a stop or end up be missing key words to make it flow right.Story Development - 3 -it doesnt seem like theres much of a plan at all, except "protect family. kill enemy." and whatever story is there feels patched together.Character Design - 2 -Not much to say there, typical OP MC that really is too dumb for his own good and is OP just to be OP.updating stability - 2 - none listed / week. granted there was a new update ~14hrs before posting this. Maybe it'll look up from here.World background- Legit feels like a ripoff of solo levelling meets latna: survival of a sword king.Overall i wouldnt say avoid this, but veteran readers be warned: this is a bit rough. Maybe it'll improve in the future, and if it does ill come back and edit this.

Honestly I was reall liking the book for the first 12 chapters but after that the story became really rushed and opened up a lot of plot holes in the story. It is really sad to see that happen to a novel that intrigued me.

i liked it .................................................................................................................................................

Passive writing style same for the character. Story development is okay?The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.

ngl, it's pretty good. and also the chapter comes out faster.keep up the good work bruh.love the story.and.. yeet,   (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ here's a thumbs up.

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