Wow! I usually wait until the end to give feedback, but with just two chapters, you've made it impossible for me to hold back! I can't stop thinking about what happens next—it's driving me crazy! You're incredibly talented! Please, keep up the amazing work! 👍🏽 Stay awesome! 🫰

The plot is very unique, the story building is not so fast nor slow. Just so-so. I wanna give it some time to progress even more. Thanks, Author!

this story is an enthralling exploration of betrayal from a close friend and a loved one. From the very first page, I was drawn into a world that felt both familiar and utterly unique. I highly recommend

This novel is good to be honest but its still lacking some, but overall this is a mid............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Reader do not allow this novel to pass you quickly grab it.

Author here! Thank you for reading my book or deciding to give it a try. If there are any mistakes, feel free to point them out! <3

It’s an enjoyable read but there are a few issues I have with it. First, they introduced Lila as one of the love interest but we barely end up seeing her. Like legit 40+ chapters with absolutely no mention of her and the author even introduces another female character during that time and it seems the author likes her more because she gets way more screen time. I know this is supposed to be a harem but you can’t just forget one of the main female characters for that long, that’s bad writing and pacing. Then there’s the stuff with his family. Bro that was done so terribly, the author made it seem like the family really betrayed him. His own sister made his gf at the time break up with him and called him disgusting. So why when he goes to confront his family, he forgives them and basically acts like nothing happened. All that happened was that the sister cried once and the next day everything was ok. That’s not how real emotions work. It takes time to forgive someone and it’s never that easy. I’m not saying that MC should’ve been immature with his reaction, but he should at least act like what they did hurt him which it did, so why was he acting so unaffected and unbothered when he actually saw them? IMO this was bad writing on the authors part. With all that being said it is interesting and not a complete lost cause. The author just needs to step it up a notch.

I haven't read the book but the name alone made my day weldone author keep it up👍🌹🌹🌹💕💕🌹💕💕💕🌹💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💖sarangayor 💕💕💕💕💕

I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.

Love the book especially the female character. I’m just waiting for the next chapter. It been 13 days since they updated. Please send more.

I am really anticipating what’s to come! Keep it up! So far so good! 🔥💖