The Luminous Veil

Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................

Can someone tell me the age of the teacher cuz if she if the diff is big it’s gonna be wierd for me                                         

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Eu gosto de ler este novel. Não só a história é interessante como o MC também é. Adoro como ignorante a certos assuntos e seu jeito torto de amor. No final vamos ver se ele vai ser dominado pelo sistema ou se ele vai distruir o sistema.Eu estou ansiosa pela continuidade da história.

Petition to bring back World's Best Martial Artist and a couple of others..................................................................................................................Don't blame me for low rating, they will either not pick this novel at all or drop it midway anyway.

It's been a great story so far and am sure it will pique anyone's interest.. Am a fan of football so when I saw the novel was about football I rushed. Good work Author.

Very bad, I have no idea how people are rating this 4-5 stars. - MC is a soulless sociopath, as is his father.- Side characters are not bad, unfortunately MC gets a lot of them killed for no reason and feels no guilt for it. - Very similar to WMW, in all the wrong ways. WMW might as well be borderline plagiarism of this story, except in WMW *everyone* is a sociopath, whereas here it's just the MC & dad (as of ch 20).- MC's power progression involves him watching people swing their swords, copying it with the AI chip, then eating some fruits and crap that boosts his strength but magically doesn't do anything for anyone else. A few weeks later he is the strongest person in the castle. - Basic inconsistencies all over the place. MC's dad travels 10 days to a mine, MC catches up within hours on foot. MC also magically scans his father from 13 kilometers away using AI chip, despite it repeatedly being established that the AI chip uses MC's senses to detect things. MC goes to woods to catch a bear that his father publicly killed the previous chapter. Author has absolutely no respect for consistency or fact checking. - Pseudo-waifu's all over the place approaching MC for ***. No downside to it, except MC claims he "can't have *** or it will interfere with the development of his body."- As extension of above point, MC is supposed to be from the future but is evidently completely ignorant of technology and biology. He also never once thinks about or mentions his entire past/future life, even though it's ostensibly the most interesting thing about him. It's hard to tell if the characters are just that shallow, or if MC is actually mentally handicapped.

Whilst we're all doing that what are you going to be doing?"