Your world-building is rich and detailed, I feel like I'm right there with the characters.please give me review also

I enjoyed your book, the way you write makes it so easy to get lost in the story. Your style really connects with me, and I’m excited to read more of your work in the future.

It was my first novel that I read. And it was fantastic I want continue read it and wish to author luck

I am the author. I would have rated this 100 starts if I could, Why?Because I love Yanderes, especially the femdom, obsessive and possessive types and not really the school days type (If u know wut I mean). I hope this novel finds it right audience. I am using Ai to proofread my chapters if you don't mind. English is not my first language, and also I do not want my novel to have a subpar quality, I hope you understand.

This shi is good. Death note is one of my favorite anime and I find this story inspired from it. The plot is amazing and the execution is also good. Good work!

I hope this is not another copy I had read like this type of novel x4

It has a promising premise with a nice slow burn and introduction to the story and the world. A little bit of input, hit the accelerator a little more on the plot because it's moving a little too slow, especially with the characters. Will like to see more soon.

This is amazing!! I can’t wait for more!!

It's a story with a lot of boring, meaningless, unnecessary monologues. My friend, decide first whether you are writing a poem or a story. This desire for poetic expression is like salt; if you add a little too much, it makes the food inedible. There's also some past life nonsense that breaks the immersion. The character died and was reborn, the event is over, why are you prolonging it? The reason for reading such stories is the person's desire to escape from reality. But you are spoiling the fun of those who want to forget reality even for a moment, don't do this. These are my recommendations, the subject is good, but unnecessary details and whining harm the story.

First chapter is stunning and well delivered; love the cat and the humor added just at the right moments.Keep it up; you have a great future writing

Lets get to the point, i've read up to 101 chapters and this is my opinion about this novel.GOOD :-Mc is blessed, strong ,and talented in magic & crafting.-I like the the modern technology that he introduce to this magical world.-Kingdom building.BAD :-Everything is too smooth for mc, it feels unreal.-Not a single villain appear, all characters have a good personality.-The only thing he fight is a river slime, what is all that power for -_--Mc's citizen can get anything  they want for free.The conclusion is,if you want to read a story of weak-to-strong mc that fight stronger enemies as he progressed, this isn't for you.if you want to read a story of crafting, and introducing modern world technology to magical world daily life, then this is for you.as for the kingdom building is below average imo, mc not even thinking of recruiting talented soldier and building strong army for his Nation. all he care is people with production talents.and it feels unreal that everyone let mc "do whatever he want comfortably" without anything bothering him.

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