V saga

Love this story. Great book

totally wasted

I like the story from the start, but the MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, MC couldn't decide on his own he has to get the opinion of that spider even on little things.The spider does not act he is from the higher world.I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel.

a part of me still wish for this to continue .... Still waiting.................................@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

If you are like me, you read the synopsis and got your hopes up, only to be let down by the piss poor writing, the translation is fine for the most part, but the main character and every other character so far are totally boring, such an interesting concept ruined by an inept author.But as always, this novel is so shit that it will be picked.

Massive plot holes that can’t be ignored.Power system makes no sense.WIth a tad bit of the usual Chinese propagandaOverall trash…………….

This is awesome!The writing quality is great. It was flawless. There were so many lines that could be made as quotes. The way Lorn sees life is on point. I loved where the story began. The story was developed in a way that could attract readers immediately. Since it's a video game-related novel, we can expect a very good world development as the story progress. Also, Lorn is pretty much an attractive character. It was a good read for me. I have already added this to my library and will continue reading to know what will happen to Lorn in the future. Keep up the good work author!I wish you the best of luck!

Very promising start my good sir. I hope that you can live to up to my high expectations. Hopefully you’ll continue and keep making awesome chapters.