just realized that a lot of things in this novel aren't thought of well or made on the spot. It isn't really a masterpiece. An alternative title for this novel would be...  "The MC is too stupid!" But the first arc is highly recommended for reading. Its ending is really amazing.

After reading many werewolves and/or system novels, I decided to give this one as my first review. I've read most of the existing reviews and decided to give my 2 cents.

Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me.  

Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all.

Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing.

World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world.

Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author.

PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"

'Hidden Marriage' rip-off nonsense where every would-be story arc happens in one chapter. Who cares if the original is completed? How hard is it to slap tropes on a page, and I mean a SINGLE page? If we're lucky, a whole story arc lasts almost 2 pages.

This is your typical Green Tea Bish stepmother and her White Lotus daughter plotting against the FL. Her fiance and father fall for it because men in these books have to be dumb as rocks or so OCD that they're 30 and have never touched a woman. After the set up in which the FL is - wait for it- DRUGGED, she packs her belongings into a suitcase and heads to the Civil Registration office to get married on 5/20 because all ***** women hit 18 and plan to marry any old male rag,  bone, and hank of hair so long as it's on 5/20 or Valentine's Day.

Jesus take me now. This book is so moronic. I'm  tired of even typing this review.

Our dashing ML CEO/billionaire is there to register a marriage with a wise woman who fails to show up. What's a scumbag billionaire to do? I know! How about marrying a clearly drugged 18 year old and having *** twice with said unconscious 18 year old child bride in a Bentley, with a driver in the front seat, while in a traffic jam?

This is lazy arse writing at it's  worst.

FL wakes up,  slips her dirty butt out of the car while he's  outside the car looking for a way out of the traffic jam because I guess he respects his driver too much to let the driver worry about the driving aspects of driving. Too bad he doesn't show the same decency when it comes to marrying and publicly shagging drugged 18 year olds looking to get married to anybody on the most romantic day of the year.

Please don't  be on this planet, reading this nonsense and driving and voting and having kids. If you're  reading this, you lack judgement and shouldn't be  doing any driving, voting, or breeding.

We're  on Chapter 8 or 9 now. After the FL left the ML's car backseat/honeymoon suite, she went to the airport, flew  to the US, found out she was 4 months pregnant, and it was too late to get an abortion so she didn't. One kid dies at birth and the one that lives is a hideous know-it-all, a snarky CEO trapped in a 4 year old's body because we have to have these sarcastic little monsters that make you drop the book, otherwise the author would actually have to come up with a plot and develop ***** characters who DON'T have to talk through a smarty pants kid.

Seriously, embroider your mask, create drama on social media, snip holes in the socks of the family member you're  most tired of quarantining  with, learn a language, or teach your cat to bark. Do any of these things - or none of these things -  but don't  waste your life on this book.

Translator? Epic.
Author ? Lazy AF.

I really loved this book but the ending was not satisfying at all. I absolutely HATE how it ended. You left no room for redemption at all. I am devastated how it ended. I kept holding out hope for real forgiveness and a chance for him to redeem himself but I was so let down I want to cry.

Hahaha...it's lockdown here bro.....what can I do ....not even allowed to walk in the park....n don't worry...you misunderstood me... I am actually not reading novels but listening them.... reading is tiring job...this way I can finish 100 chapters just in a day in two or three hours....I am not 24 h phone addict hahaha....I study n do daily chores n any other normal thing too..hahaha but thanks for asking anyways...you are nice man

A must read if you've read Coiling Dragon. But its terribly long. I remember legit skipping a volume cause i couldn't believe they were giving these side characters any limelight. I feel as if I missed nothing.
Vol 1-5 were good, dicy up till 10. Then its dogshit till like 13, then its smooth. The final few volumes were good imo.