in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.
Status: 1200+ chapters , completed, epic storyline
MC isn't an unfeeling blob nor is he an edgy psycho.
Falls into the neutral or chaotic good camp, so sorry if you wanted a villain. However i feel that this story has perfect balance between its many elements. What I like is that the mc makes a genuine connection with the world and people around him and there are plenty of likable side characters. The villains provide a real sense of threat despite the mc being quite OP to be frank.
One of my biggest complains with trial read webnovels is that often times the only interesting part of the story is the power system, the world building or some other gimmicky mechanics, and while that is enough to keep my interested in the starting part of the story, once the mc becomes powerful enough i just stop caring, it's not just about lowered stakes its also cause some mc don't really form any meaningful connections or friends or have anything that they genuinely care about, which imo is a very important part of having a soulful and engaging narrative.
This story has that good stuff, it's not too much but its there, which makes it worth it.
I don't know what to say I'm just tired of yuri if the male protagonist got reborn as female and wants girls instead of men I don't mind but the main protagonist is a girl should she at least have some kind of attraction toward men . I really like the main character she is strong , smart and merclic but why is she only attracted to women and I feel all men in this novel is incompetent, dumb and perverts only think about pretty girls even the king of the beast country is incompetent and weak I don't mind yuri but at least can't you add both men and female love.
This is a different take on witches. And for once, the sacrifice isn't female lol. The writing is good though there r some sentences tht r too long. But, overall it is easy to understand. The plot itself is already intriguing from the synopsis. The king himself failed to follow the tradition. I'm quite curious if there would be a curse befalling the prince. On another note, the world building is superb. I love the bg narration and the naming sounds realistic for some reason.
ok while I haven't read this book why are you saying a god should be indifferent? a god should literally be able to do whatever they want and from myths about gods that's exactly what they have always done basically even the bible has God interfering with mortals so the only other place you could get that image of gods would be other novels which don't matter in this book the very idea that a god should act any specific kind of way especially a standard set by mortals is ridiculous
I'm just writing this review because of the annoying update stability.....
okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal
Anyways:
Some grammatical errors. But way better than average.
Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value.
Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels.
Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.
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MC isn't an unfeeling blob nor is he an edgy psycho.
Falls into the neutral or chaotic good camp, so sorry if you wanted a villain. However i feel that this story has perfect balance between its many elements. What I like is that the mc makes a genuine connection with the world and people around him and there are plenty of likable side characters. The villains provide a real sense of threat despite the mc being quite OP to be frank.
One of my biggest complains with trial read webnovels is that often times the only interesting part of the story is the power system, the world building or some other gimmicky mechanics, and while that is enough to keep my interested in the starting part of the story, once the mc becomes powerful enough i just stop caring, it's not just about lowered stakes its also cause some mc don't really form any meaningful connections or friends or have anything that they genuinely care about, which imo is a very important part of having a soulful and engaging narrative.
This story has that good stuff, it's not too much but its there, which makes it worth it.
Do give it a try.
Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck!
okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal
Anyways:
Some grammatical errors. But way better than average.
Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value.
Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels.
Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.