I don't know what happened to WB but I have to say that the last few batches of trial novels are really not outstanding but disappointing to say the least. In this case you have the typical cliché of a young girl betrayed by her half-sister, stepmother, father and ex-fiance...she stumbled into the first man that crossed her road who magically is a young, rich, handsome and overbearing CEO who rules the world ....She got drugged, had *** and got pregnant... what to say? There's nothing new here!!! Continue your road! Worse in this badly written one everything happened in the first 10 chapters or so....you know how this will end up so why wasting time?
to start this off properly I have to preface this with I haven't read this book yet I just wanted to say something to the author.
you said roughly that the mc will start off weak and not to expect him to power level, i'm fine with that as long as his abilities are either interesting and or well explored.
a example of this is the dao of magic it takes a already interesting and IMO ability/power cultivation and explores it rather thoroughly.
the reason this is relavent is because "to me at least" this is one of the major draws to a op fan fiction almost instant access to cool abilities/powers to explore.
this acts as a really good hook to get people to stay and continue reading especially on fan fic sites,
because you most probably won't find people who care about the story or character development as long as the mc doesn't make them want to throw up in repulsion.
ps sorry if this comes out as a big block of text I wrote this on my phone I tried to make it not one but I can only hope it worked.
his mc is biased towards some people close to him, even meddling in selecting gods and eliminating people he doesn't like
I suggest you to stop if you don't want to see a Creator who doesn't act like a god, I mean he still has emotions unlike a god in general who is cold and look down on the world
ok while I haven't read this book why are you saying a god should be indifferent? a god should literally be able to do whatever they want and from myths about gods that's exactly what they have always done basically even the bible has God interfering with mortals so the only other place you could get that image of gods would be other novels which don't matter in this book the very idea that a god should act any specific kind of way especially a standard set by mortals is ridiculous
Reading in present tense really threw me off, couldn't read very far because I couldn't get used to it. Its a small detail but made the whole reading experience a lot more challenging, much like how in Coiling Dragon everyone just keeps "laughing calmly."
If you are asking about new chapter, I’ll post it today. I’m not a professional translator, I post chapters at the same time as I read them. I hope it answers your question.
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you said roughly that the mc will start off weak and not to expect him to power level, i'm fine with that as long as his abilities are either interesting and or well explored.
a example of this is the dao of magic it takes a already interesting and IMO ability/power cultivation and explores it rather thoroughly.
the reason this is relavent is because "to me at least" this is one of the major draws to a op fan fiction almost instant access to cool abilities/powers to explore.
this acts as a really good hook to get people to stay and continue reading especially on fan fic sites,
because you most probably won't find people who care about the story or character development as long as the mc doesn't make them want to throw up in repulsion.
ps sorry if this comes out as a big block of text I wrote this on my phone I tried to make it not one but I can only hope it worked.
I suggest you to stop if you don't want to see a Creator who doesn't act like a god, I mean he still has emotions unlike a god in general who is cold and look down on the world
Maybe I'll try again when the mood strikes.