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  1. Leon
    This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.
    The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.
    But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.
    The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.
    The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.
    Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.
    The world background seems to be normal  world around 2013.
    It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.
    So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.
    Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.
    To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
  1. Leon
    Anirut_Sreyakul review The PATHS By Zebiri
    Reading in present tense really threw me off, couldn't read very far because I couldn't get used to it. Its a small detail but made the whole reading experience a lot more challenging, much like how in Coiling Dragon everyone just keeps "laughing calmly."

    Maybe I'll try again when the mood strikes.
  1. Leon
    Darth_Evolution898 review Mutagen
    DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters.

    Oh boy.
    This novel is absolutely horrendous.
    To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying,

    ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’

    for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway?

    Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it.

    And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking.

    Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop  workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help.



    And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader.

    I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.
  1. Leon
    This is a really well-written novel. The description is amazing and the scene development causes the reader to get thrills. The characters are rare and interesting and the plot is different compared to most stories on Webnovel. Overall, appealing piece of writing. Good job, Author.
    Summed up in one word: UNIQUE
  1. Leon
    WriterTheos review Reverse Lifes
    you do realize all that you stated has absolutely nothing to do with my response right? i simply commented on your notion about how a god should behave and like i stated at the beginning of my comment i haven't even read the book nor was i planning to tbh seems like too much drama happens which isn't to my taste
  1. Leon
    I don't know what happened to WB but I have to say that the last few batches of trial novels are really not outstanding but disappointing to say the least. In this case you have the typical cliché of a young girl betrayed by her half-sister, stepmother, father and ex-fiance...she stumbled into the first man that crossed her road who magically is a young, rich, handsome and overbearing CEO who rules the world ....She got drugged, had *** and got pregnant... what to say? There's nothing new here!!! Continue your road! Worse in this badly written one everything happened in the first 10 chapters or so....you know how this will end up so why wasting time?
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