I like the first two chapters of the story; they really pique my interest, the MC is quite likable, and his emotions feel real. However, once he traversed into another world, his arrogance skyrocketed. The story is unique but too fast-paced; having a rebellion in just two chapters at most felt somewhat lacking. If I may suggest, try to explore your characters deeper; give them a background and their goals. Consider them your creations and let your readers have a proper understanding of the world. Do not just rely on MC reading thoughts. And I would like to ask the author, will the MC return to his previous world? I'm more interested in that than his current world.

As a fan, reading this novel for the first time was a huge blow to me - the whole thing is perfect! I'll post 4 chapters every day. Since the first volume is equivalent to Season 1, you can also watch it on Loklok (which has nice quality) or other platforms. Additionally, you can watch Season 2 as an anime, which is why I wanted to rush through the chapters, hehe.WARNING: This is indeed a copy, and the original writer is Rifujin na Magonote.

it's typically thesame thing with the lather

Your novel has potential, though there are only 3 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....

Reading is not my type but when i discovered this novel it makes me want to read more!!. My first impression while reading this novel reminds me of the anime Solo leveling, but this novel is more interesting.

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

So far, the story has been amazing. I dare say it's a masterpiece. The pace of the plot is admirable and the characters are solid. The cliffhanger in each chapter makes this book very much fascinating.

Can someone explain to me why such good stories have to be wasted by trash MCs???                                                                     

Finally this great friend published his second novel, I read the outline of this man's story and I really recommend it, the story will be quite good, I am a friend of this writing and he gave me access to advance chapters and it is quite good 100% recommendable.

Your novel is an incredible masterpiece! The world-building is immersive, and the characters are deeply crafted, each with their own unique complexities. The way you weave the plot is captivating, with unexpected twists that keep the reader on the edge of their seat. The pacing is perfectly balanced, keeping the tension high without feeling rushed. The language you use is eloquent yet accessible, drawing the reader into the story effortlessly. The themes explored are thought-provoking, adding layers of depth that elevate the overall experience. Without a doubt, this is a story that will resonate long after the final page.”

I really like this novel, it's a modern fantasy and the chemistry between the male lead and the female lead made me rethink my relationship, hahaha just kidding, but this novel is amazing.

Wonderful story keep it up… the book is a thriller…