Good book so far,  haven't completed the chapter but the little I read is really intriguing and captivating. Nice! How to catch up soon and see how the book goes.

it's a great book with a very interesting plot I love the storyline ☺️

I like the first two chapters of the story; they really pique my interest, the MC is quite likable, and his emotions feel real. However, once he traversed into another world, his arrogance skyrocketed. The story is unique but too fast-paced; having a rebellion in just two chapters at most felt somewhat lacking. If I may suggest, try to explore your characters deeper; give them a background and their goals. Consider them your creations and let your readers have a proper understanding of the world. Do not just rely on MC reading thoughts. And I would like to ask the author, will the MC return to his previous world? I'm more interested in that than his current world.

A bit delayed for this mandatory self-review. Hope everyone enjoys this modern x fantasy story we have cooked up! A combination of drama, comedy and action. Hope you all read this!

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I must say it's a pretty decent novel, with a relatable MC (I LOVE THE DAMN MC😅🌹). I had a few laughs from reading this and was quite impressed with the writing style.My only problem is the length of the chapters, for a webnovel its's too long and some times staring at all those words I'm yet to read becomes a bore.Nonetheless I'm I love with this novel. The MC is basically me, and for that i love it!.I'd advise any passerbys to ignore the flaws(if there's any) and give this damn novel a try.

Well, I think it's okay, only read when free, and don't have anything to read again

I would have given 10/10 just for someone writing something new and not following the cliche to support their uniqueness and encourage them for that.But damn this story is soo good 👍 Despite starting reading the story after reading some *questionable* reviews, I still read it and will continue reading it. Keep up the good work 💯

it should be a good story with wonderful potential Mc brings down the quality by a lot and made me feel like it needed veteran webnovel reader patience to read 50 chapters it felt like author tried to flesh put characters but ended up with more issues...like isekaied mc needed a sword to tell him how a system workedfuturistic fantasy world with magic and technology but no DNA test or blood rituals for paternity...characters too are flawed like first thought on seeing an albino kid is adultery.. on a noble family matriarch who then proceeds to weep like a maid and abuse the kid for 9 yrsthere are other things like authors attempt at mother pov to make it more reasonable..but the attempts to whitewash his mother and sister is even more forced..an s class lvl sister who silently watched the abuse for some unfathomable reason even if u can tolerate all these then mc helps by being so annoying for a supposedly 23 yr old dude with mental age of 16 by acting 7 dude has good powers which is basically equivalent exchange (sacrifice) can get op if he had more than 2 brain cells and stoppp3d whiningread at your preference coz honestly good story with development potential..but author seems to want to focus on family  drama part

Hello, I am the almighty author.Although this is my second novel, I must say that I have worked hard on the plot to ensure it is well thought out. I waited for the right moment to publish it, and even though it was challenging at first to structure each chapter and keep the story engaging, I am happy with the result.Now then, you’re probably wondering how many chapters it will have. To be honest, I’m not completely sure, but I plan for it to have a minimum of 500 and a maximum of 800 chapters. The story will be divided into 8 to 10 volumes, each containing 2 or 3 narrative arcs.Oh, and by the way, from the prologue to chapter 19, it will serve as the "Introduction or Context" so that you don’t think it’s filler, a waste of time, or something unnecessary to write.I know my writing still has a lot of room for improvement, but I’ve been working on it. Starting from chapter 35, I put more effort into refining my style, and I also rewrote the first chapters because I wasn’t fully satisfied with them.Now, regarding whether there will be a harem... The answer is a resounding "NO." This is a novel primarily focused on action and the protagonist’s development as he prepares to defeat the Nine Monarchs. However, don’t worry; there will be some romance later on. Although it will play a secondary role, the protagonist will have a partner further into the story, but not in the early arcs.If you have any questions after reading the first arc, I’ll be happy to answer them. But if you haven’t read it yet, I recommend doing so before asking anything. It’s better for you to discover the details of the story for yourself. (Hehe, yes, I’m quite a playful author).Lastly, I want to thank you for giving my novel a chance. In my opinion, and that of some friends, the story is decent. My writing might not be perfect at the beginning, but I hope you’ll continue reading and leave a review once you’ve decided whether you liked it or not.Thank you for reading this!

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This novel is tagged  harem right?. Right?