Yup it is childish! But maybe it's too early to judge, but I feel like the story will grow into a boring piece, you still have time you can work and come up with a better story, as the story is in its beginning stage I give it at least a 3 star because there are chances for both upliftment and failure

I like the story so far, mystery around the world is so well done, keep up the good work 🙏

Overall I I like the novel, it’s something new and I think it has big potential, however I would like it if you help Chelsea or join them in someway. (Personal request)

Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?

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Amazing 😍😍 and interesting highly recommend

Keep updating please!!!Interesting start

I mean this is quite decent. Although by a  friend I decided to leave a review. I love books set in the mediaval times and this delivered. Gritty but impressive.Highly recommend!!!

Fell onto this book through recommendations, and got hooked. Characters are fleshed out so well - some common archetypes, but def a lot more subtly done than many books; plot/story builds up realistically, not crazy fast or unconnected way; and setting is really well-built so it's easy to be "in" it. Really enjoying this book, def reading faster than I had planned so I'm excited for more updates! (I rated update stability as 3 bc I have no idea; it says 25 chs a week, so it's been on here only 2 weeks?) I totally recommend this book though, esp if updates are steady, and esp if you don't want the typical aloof, abusive ML and weak, "victim" FL.

This is actually the type of novel I love so I'm going to take my time to read it 🥺if I love it might finish it.

Hey that was actually a pretty fun readKeeps me waiting for more