I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~

The book is really interesting. I read the entire 11chapters and find them intriguing. Hopefully we will continue this journey together, dear author

i have a question why the dates of book 2 and 3 are not syncing, like in book 2 last updation date is 7th march 2025 but book 3 has starting from september 2024, how is that possible

Hey Author,Your writing is so approaching I love the every characters . Best wishes waiting for your next chapters.  The main lead Marcella is so amazing I really love it .

whoa first chapter so funny i can feel that

this sucks I was expecting him to be reserved or something from the description but it seems I miss read he's only thinking about making a harem I hate humans who think only about their sexual desires.

Heya! GlaringError here! Thank you for giving this book a chance! :)So this is my second book on WN. Those who know me and read my first-ever book exceeding 100 plus chapters (TRA) know how I write stories. Even after writing so many chapters, I would say I am not yet as experienced as others on this platform who have been writing for years.Still, I will do my very best to write an amazing story that I would feel proud of sharing with you all! Hence my 2025 WSA entry with this book!I have learned a lot about writing and storytelling these past 7 months since TRA started, and I will say that all that I have learned I want to apply in this story! There were many mistakes that I made as an amateur writer which I want to improve on with this book. Basically, this book is a younger brother of my last work. Is it connected or not? No comments.I hope you enjoy it. :)About the story:It's a story in a very modern setting. It is about a VR game, but it's not played as a normal MMORPG. I have experimented with a lot of elements here... You will see if you read it. The idea was with me for a long time in my life, I hesitated before putting it into writing. I don't know... it just felt like it was too close to me, and no matter how I write it, I will not be able to do it justice.But I gotta try!It's a really big story—well, in my mind, it is. I will have to see how it goes before I build tons and tons of lore. :)Oh yeah! The MC has a genetic problem and can't speak. He uses sign language. This element is dedicated to one of my closest friends in school who also has the same condition. He was quite popular though, and he helped me, a poor introvert blob, quite a lot in surviving high school... We loved reading and finding interesting books together from the library. :)

there is no problem you are story but the biggest problem is that your MC is just a total psycho does not have a single emotion and I think you psycho words with better for this kind of character that you made it does not develop or understand that he is doing something wrong and there is no right and wrong for this psycho Main character of yours

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I don't know what to say.I don't want to say.

A fun novel to waste time. The author's style is constantly improving. Perhaps my only problem is that there is some filler in the middle chapters, but the author may have realized his mistake and become better than it was.

As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the  "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet  he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat