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So so interesting and intriguing. Kudos to the author. I can't wait to find out how Ava ends up with the masked man.

Chapter order is messed upOr the author has no idea on how to make a bookOne chapter the MC goes to some genius who's had his talent sealed to take him away, the next chapter the genius is taking the sect disciple admission test, the next chapter genius acknowledges MC as his master, the next chapter genius begs MC to make him his disciple.Either translator problem with chapter sequences or bad writing.MC has a sign in system with a disciple systemEvery special disciple he gets will give him a reward.MC reborn in a wuxia world as a direct disciple of a peak in a sect.Nothing else so far.

I think this author is planning on making mc harems more dominant than the Mc himself. I read the other novel of this author before .. But this I only enjoy 10 chaps  And I'm sure author will just drop this...... And it's annoying that the author is so addicted on making girls more dominant than the mc...

The first chapter is good, and the book has an interesting plot that caught my eye almost immediately. I love how the writer portrays the characters.Kudos to the author!

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A Hidden Gem for meThe plot is really interesting and it is not the same type of novel wherein the mc just flaunts his power and also just becomes immediately op well he is op but he is low key af and I really like it compared to the generic shit that is post and written all the time.THIS NOVEL IS WORTH A READAUTHOR PLEASE DON'T DROP THE NOVELFCK THE RANTERS STUPID AF READERS WHO ONLY READ GENERIC SHIT

The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125

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