Ang mutya ng section e (Book 1) English

To the Author,1. Writing quality is to the level of undrestand but not to the good/best quality,2. Updates- atleast 1 or 2 chapters per week,3. Story development is good but make it little bit instense training for MC.4. Make MC and Anti-Hero who does Justice and kill the wrong-doers, Make his outfit/Suit full black without Mask or With Mask with lots of defensive fuinjustsu on it's suit,Make MC the Master of all things - Survival Technique, Sealing, Fuinjustsu , Martial Arts( Combat , Sword, Staff and all other weapons, Chi, Ki, Chakra, Nature Energy and Yin/Yang Energy,  etc.,), all Ninjutsu(also creates his unique jutsus which can be leard by any one but is very hard including his Sage Mode)All Sage Modes- Combining it into one unique Sage Mode to Make it permanent to his body only with Tattos no other like becoming otsusuki but Making him to grow with unlimited potential.Make the MC have his GF/Wife to have both Biyakugan and Sharingan together.( and No Harem please)4. World Background - Make it Light hearted as Well as Dark sides too. Make The MC have his own group in ANBU/Normal Ninja as It named Rudra( who finish the evil by eradicating it completely to it's roots) with out mask and sometimes mask(for special missions- Simple black human mask with numbers) but ALL BLACK with lots of invisible fuinjustsu on it cloth making it very defensive.Thanks!Yours truly-Reader-Kun.

I think the girl in this novel is the daughter of Ji Mo from Transcending the Nine Heavens. I believe it was mentioned (in Realms in the Firmament) that Ji Mo lost a bet with Chu Yang, so Ji Mo had to send his daughter down to the mortal realms to look for a husband and to get stronger as an individual. Ji Mo also asked his brothers (Chu Yang and the other seven) to bestow some treasures on her so she would be safe in the mortal world. His masculine wife beat the **** outta Ji Mo because she didnt know about the bet lol. They dote on her a lot so they thought no one was good enough to be her husband.

I liked how it started and not just the typical wishful thinking and all those things that many people already know from reading a lot of "fanfic".- I found your story by chance (since I always check the part of novels and everything related to yuri, as I always give him a look, whether good or bad xD) i must say that it is at the same level as other yuri stories of authors of this platform that update not so often, but that if they have quality (and not to belittle the other yuri stories, but as you always read the same reincarnate with desires and be a character of a novel, then go crazy to know the plot and have all the girls xD) I started to like yuri's stories (I used to read the normal harem stories, but eventually I started to get bored of reading the same thing, but when I happened to google in the "novel update" section, I found little stories that were about yuri's stories. I found small stories that were of "girl love

I like the scientific view of magic in the story. Even though the setting of the story is of another novel, I still like it overall. I can't wait for more chapters. 🥰

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the  engagement of your book

Ano?

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