the prologue to me is the best part, I love how you took time to explain the verse and how everything came into existence

I usually enjoy male lead action novels but it was so well written and captured my attention leaving me no choice but to keep going. Great read! Keep up the good work!!

Amazing story! Going to give this 5 stars because I'll definitely be reading it again! And I'll be on the lookout for new chapters that are hopefully coming in the future! :D

I honestly can't wait to see how this story unfolds. So far, the main characters seem to be tolerating each other enough, I hope they're end game. They're so different, yet so connected in some way. Fingers crossed.🤫

It's a year the last I heard about this book. iI'mglad this is still updating. First arc is a blast and gets better the more I read on. wishing the author to release frequently like she/he used to.

I was recommended this book just today and I'm almost halfway through the posted chapters and all I can say is wow,I've not encountered any error and the pace and character development is great

Author’s Totally Unbiased 5-Star Review (Trust Me, I’m the Author)Yoo!! The greatest author of all time is here! …Okay, maybe not, but hey, a man can dream. Before we get into it, let me just say—yes, I’m giving my own novel a 5-star rating. Why? Because if I don’t hype my own work, who will?Alright, enough chit-chat. Let’s talk about THE NOVEL.First things first—Where’s the MC?!Now, let me address the elephant in the room. If you’ve already started reading, you might be wondering,"Yo, where the hell is the main character? Did the author forget about him? Did he fall into a spatial crack?"Well, surprise! The MC doesn’t even appear until Chapter 20.I know, I know—it’s insane, unheard of, borderline criminal in male-oriented novels! But before you start throwing tomatoes, hear me out. There’s a reason for this madness.The first 10-15 chapters focus on world-building, setting the stage for something BIG. And no, I’m not just dragging it out to increase my chapter count (probably). Trust me, when you see how everything connects later, you’ll either think I’m a genius or just a really lucky writer who somehow made it work. Either way, stick around—you won’t regret it.Power System: Awakening + Cultivation = ???Now, let’s talk about the power system. I know what you’re thinking:"Wait, did this madman mix awakening and cultivation together?"Yes. Yes, I did.Why? Because I wanted to try something new—something that breaks away from the usual cookie-cutter “awakening” stories. This is my grand experiment. Maybe it’ll be groundbreaking, or maybe it’ll be an absolute disaster. Either way, you’re in for a ride.So, the story starts with the usual Awakening scene. You know, the classic ceremony where people awaken their powers, some get OP talents, others get trash ones, yada yada…But hold up—don’t roll your eyes just yet.I know how cliché this setup is. I’ve read all those novels too. And I know exactly how boring it gets when you can predict every single thing that’s about to happen.That’s why I’m telling you right now—this is NOT your typical Awakener story.Sure, the beginning might look familiar, but trust me, I have some serious twists planned. Just give me a little time to work my magic, and you’ll see how everything transforms into something completely different.So, just bear with me for a bit. I promise you—this won’t be the same old Awakening story you’ve seen a hundred times before. It’s going somewhere unexpected.Villains? Oh, You’re Not Ready.Now, about the villains… I won’t say much, because where’s the fun in spoiling the surprises? But here’s what I will tell you:These aren’t your typical “evil young masters” or “generic demon lords.” Some of them can stand toe-to-toe with the MC, and some are even worse.And the best part? They’re not all Awakeners.That’s right—something much worse lurks in the shadows. Who are they? What do they want? You’ll have to read to find out.The MC—Overpowered, but Not a Brain-Dead Battle ManiacSo, about our dear protagonist. Yes, he’s strong. No, he’s not invincible.He’s not the type who runs around smashing anyone who dares look at him funny or starting fights because someone underestimated him. No, my MC has a brain, and he actually uses it.Think of him as a patient, calculative monster—the kind of guy who doesn’t waste time flexing his strength on nobodies but will silently set up checkmate before his enemies even realize they’re playing his game.And here’s another plus: the people around him aren’t idiots either. No brain-dead sidekicks, no walking plot devices, just actual smart and capable characters who can stand on their own. Because let’s be real—nothing ruins a good story faster than an overpowered MC surrounded by a bunch of walking potatoes.Let’s Talk About Romance—No 300-Chapter Hug Marathon!Alright, let’s get one thing straight—the romance in this novel isn’t the "Wait 300 chapters for a single hug" type. Nope, we’re not playing that game here.But at the same time, it’s also not the "Wow, I just met you, let’s get married" kind of nonsense either. You won’t see the MC and a female lead locking eyes and instantly declaring eternal love like they’re in some cheesy romance drama.So, what kind of romance is it?It’s slow, but not painfully slow—more like a steady, natural progression where feelings develop over time, but things actually move forward instead of dragging forever.And let me be clear—the female leads are no pushovers. They’re not the kind to stand around waiting for the MC to save them every five chapters. They can stand on their own, fight their own battles, and make their own decisions. In short, they’re not just there to be damsels in distress or decoration for the MC’s journey.So, if you’re tired of the usual "romance that never progresses" or "female lead who exists only to be rescued," then don’t worry—this one’s got some real character development.What Makes This Novel Different?Alright, let’s be real—I’m not here to tell you this is the best novel ever written or that it’s going to revolutionize the web novel industry. But what I can promise you is this:This will be one of the weirdest novels you’ve ever read.Now, let’s break it down:✅ MC introduction happens in Chapter 20. Yeah, I know, it’s insane. Who does that in a male-oriented novel? Me, apparently. But trust me, there’s a reason. A good one. (Probably.)✅ A mix of Awakening & Cultivation power systems. Why choose one when you can have both? It’s experimental, it’s messy, but hey, that’s part of the fun.✅ The MC is overpowered—but not in a "one-punch and done" way. He’s strong, yes, but he doesn’t just go around slapping everyone who underestimates him. He has brains, strategy, and patience. He’s not the type to throw hands over an insult, but when he does fight… well, let’s just say things get messy.✅ Side characters and villains have brains. No dumb minions, no "evil for the sake of being evil" villains. Some of them might even be able to go toe-to-toe with the MC or even above MC. ✅ Romance starts early. No 300-chapter waiting game. But also not a rushed “love at first sight” situation either. It’s slow but steady, and the female leads? They can actually fight. No "MC, save me!" moments every five chapters.✅ The system isn’t just a cheat code for the MC. It plays a much bigger role than just handing out power-ups. And no, the MC isn’t the only one with access to it.✅ Psychological depth. Yeah, I attempted to add some deep, thought-provoking elements. Let’s see how that plays out.✅ This novel has a bit of EVERYTHING. Action, mystery, strategy, power struggles, romance, world-building—basically, if you like variety, you’re in for a ride.The Verdict?This novel might not be your favorite or the best thing you’ve ever read, but if you’re looking for something different—something that breaks away from the usual clichés—then give it a shot.I guarantee one thing: It will entertain you.And if nothing else… at least you can say you’ve read the weirdest novel out there.

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Absolutely mesmerizing! *Beyond The Veils* captures the perfect balance between mystery, fantasy, and heartfelt emotion. The way the author builds the world behind the veils is both enchanting and haunting. The characters are multi-dimensional, with arcs that made me feel their joys and heartbreaks. I especially loved the twists and turns that kept me guessing until the very end. This is a masterpiece of storytelling that I highly recommend to fans of fantasy and intrigue.

this is actually pretty good. I've already gotten attached to all the characters and adding Finn for comic relief was a good idea!

This novel pulled me in from the first sentence! The eerie, poetic tone mixed with vivid descriptions makes every moment feel immersive. The tension, mystery, and fast-paced action are so well balanced, I couldn't look away. The writing is gripping, and I can't wait to read more. Amazing job! :3

isn't that pockemon with extra steps??😶😶😶