it's good in my opinion 👍🏻(why am I saying this I'm the writer 😭)

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥

Good and engaging story building, Has a lot of interesting characters, Love how they interact with each other. The writing quality is good enough, Could use some improvement~ Well, that said, Keep up the good work author-san! Good luck!

writing quality = Awesome Story development = no reason to care for the characters beyond the surface traits due to how fat the scenes keep changing . There is almost no character development for any of the main characters, side characters, or the supporting characters beyond what little is written and that can be inferred by reading between the lines.character design = nothing is really known about ANY of the characters and the side characters to the point that all the cast feel like wet cardboard cutouts and not really matters what happens to them, including the MC.update stability = too soon to tell.TLDR- Very little is known about any of the characters. Pacing goes from 0 to 100 very quickly, and scenes change way too fast. No character building/ growth or reasoning of actions beyond surface level, which feels very forced and not natural.

thiis is the best novel this novel is good im not really lying this novel is the best good

Thank you so much for picking up this novel !!? It’s been a journey writing this and I’m excited to finally share it with you. This chapter marks the beginning of a new adventure and I truly hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

beautifully written novel that captures the essence of love and longing under the serene glow of moonlight. The author masterfully weaves a tale of romance and heartache, drawing readers into a world where emotions are as vivid as the night sky. The characters are deeply relatable, and their journeys resonate with anyone who has ever experienced the bittersweet nature of love. The prose is lyrical, painting each scene with a delicate brush that makes the story come alive. "Love in Moon" is a must-read for anyone who appreciates a poignant and heartfelt narrative that lingers long after the last page is turned.

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The are so meany great video game novels without reviews :( I will make it my job the review and support them. What a great novel you have here. I will support with my power stone if I can tommorow

This is a refreshing read for me !! It's just I want more of the 'villain' family story than the so called 'lead'.

I am really enjoying this story so far. its_alan appears to pump out updates much faster than I can read them because I read pretty slow if I'm honest.There is a really interesting way the story is written where the dialogue of the characters feels more natural than many other stories I have read. They have a certain bond between them whether it is a heated exhange, or a loving exchange. There is a voice and accent even to a lot of these characters that I can hear in my head.The world even though it is an apocalyptic scene sounds like a paradise in the works with beaches and housing at the click of a button with a special system in place that is explained early on. More gets explained through each chapter.The crab Clancy is a very fun character premise and he seems adored by commenters. The story has a lot of promise and a lot of ways it can go. There are villains that pop up and great friendships made along the way. Mysteries, suspense, humor, romance, and perhaps a love triangle. Not sure yet.

Hi readers, author here. I want to first thank you for taking up my work and  reading it. It's an honour to write for such a wide audience, I want to say I had a lot of fun writing the work, the world building and character. Though I don't  feel my work to be anything new I try to add a fun twist every now and then. Feel free to use this medium to ask questions and if you want to get in an even deeper discussion go to my discord.Once again it was fun writing for such an audience.