Mated To The Demon Prince

I love this story and the premises of it but I just have a couple things that I feel like for me are lowering the quality of the story. I have gotten to like chapter 105+ and I hate that we spent more chapters on the two girls he meant randomly than his parents and his family. I’d love to see some authentic family interactions not just when the MC wants something or is informing them of something. They fought to have him so we should see more of this relationship. Second is I wish we have more character development for the MC cuz half the time he is emotionless and we barely see his emotions to people around him. I wish the story revolved around more about his family, school/teachers and maybe his other careers and business. The harem thing is way to early for him as just a 11 yr old and it just feels weird. Either way I’m barely hanging on to stay with this story and not give up half way so hopefully things get better down more chapters.

I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one.So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come.The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack.Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.

First of all this review would point out the negative aspects of this novel since there's plenty of positives one already. For the most part Rise of the Undead Legion has a solid foundation with characters and world design. But sadly the quality and story development isn't that great.1. Writing Quality + Story DevelopmentThe story development at first 100 ch is pretty enjoyable although it's not a masterpiece it's still a nice morning read that would leave you wanting more. But, after that the story took a massive hit to its quality so much that if i reviewed the later chapter i would rate it as 1/5.The story in the first arc of rebuilding the undead legion is very good. I'm really immersed in how the MC slowly builds up his army and power. His story of roaming around the world collecting strong capable undead are enjoyable.But after it's just meh. For the 100 ++ ch, the story keeps giving more and more obstacle for our MC to solve. The obstacle itself is not a problem since it presents a real trouble that even makes me wonder if our MC could solve it or not. But, the way he solved it are always anticlimatic, every single boss fight at later chapter always leave me saying "That's it?". For example there are 2 major bosses in 200++ ch that is killed with a lucky coincidence and a lucky instant hit kill. There's always a huge build up for each of those bosses but somehow it always ends with our MC getting a 1% instant kill chance or a lucky coincidence negating all of the ******* that the author builds up towards it. Totally unrewarding for the readers.It really boggles my mind when the author decided to kill a boss in a single chapter in a totally anti-climatic way. The boss has been build up as a stalking predator that could assassinate the MC at any time. But, since our MC received a major power up the boss just got used as a punching bag. I mean c'mon you already build up the fight with this boss for 100 chapters! And he got killed in a single chapter.And also it seems like the author is in a rush to finish the story(?).There are a few major arc that just happens. Like for example the story needs our MC to do this 5 task so he just did the 5 task with no actual problem in doing it. And sometime during the fights that are sprinkled in during the quest that absolutely have no ******* at all the author suddenly said "Oh yeah he's at 1% health" to create artificial sense of urgency.Plus some of the power up during later chapter are totally undeserved.For example, there's a problem about the lack of boats. So suddenly our MC has the capability of building boats in the next chapter. And suddenly in the next chapter he's building the best legendary boat since the boatyard coincidentally has the guy that build the legendary boat during his life as a human. Yeah.... that's kinda pushing itThat problem above has occurred lots of times during the story. The MC has a problem of reach when he is mounted. So the blacksmith in the next chapter has a legendary glaive that he could buy. Then MC has a problem of obtaining the blood of a lvl 999 monster. Yeah the monster is selling it in exchange for something that the MC is already producing. Wait he doesn't have enough? Worry not the monster accept loans without any interest.2. Stability of UpdatesIn my experience it's quite stable. 1 ch/day is enough for this kind of novel. Nothing interesting to review in this part3. Character DesignThe novel has tons of unique characters that I think are very interesting to read. Each of them has an unique characteristic and design that I think other novel could take this novel as an example on how to create an interesting character. But during fights the story really struggles in making them look useful, especially the parts that includes the undead army.4. World BackgroundFor the undead world the author did a really great job in creating a believable environment for our skeleton guy to wander around and have an adventure. But sadly some of the times in the living world some places feels like they are just plopped there since they are not that well developed except for the Wild region.---- End of the review ----Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in MMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it alreadyAlso the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it alreadyAlso the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it alreadyAlso the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it alreadyAlso the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already

Legit the best story I have ever read, interesting plot and idea. However, the flaw to this story I believe is the inconvenience the hat has, which the MC requires his system to work physically with the hat on his head. Besides that, this story was well-written, translation quality is alright, and the plot is uniquely intriguing.

I love this already but up updating the story daily would be awesome if you have time of course and I love how this is game like. I love the characters

Can you believe that all this time I was never curious if I can edit old comments. I was on another site and I remembered this now. I've been working this week and meeting new people who have inspired me to work harder on my English. A good week everyone.

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complete waste of novel concept. terrible dialog and extreme cringy and not cringy in the cool chuni way.. this novel is complete trash and a disgrace to CCS