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DaoistfLkaoq
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- July 1,2024
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Hello, dear author. I see that your working hard on your stories, keep up the good work! Your idea was interesting. I just want to put some slight um suggestions if it's okay with you. Don't worry, I myself is still learning to be better, and I also want other such as you to improved to your gift that was given by the our, Lord, God most high in heaven. My suggestions is, if you could on your character dialogue. When the conversation was still ongoing and won't put end yet, you can put this (,) or if it already ended and won't be broaden further you can put this at the end sentence (.) also, one last thing, the indentions to your paragraph.That's all, over all was great! I hope, this could give you motivation to keep going on your passion in writing stories. Don't forget, any ideas is precious, and so does yours. Keep going! Don't worry, π I myself is still improving.
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This novel is very good and very interested.I like it and I hope you also like is too.After all, I give this novel full marks.ππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Author Honest review. Well this is my first published story. I'm both excited and terrified of the outcome. But I try not to butch things up. I am imagining myself in the eyes of Silver while writing so I want him enjoy the world of Hunter X Hunter and not just write the story for the sake of writing. Have a lot of chapters stored already but I won't be posting them all at once so that I don't lose all my stacks.
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Sort of had some mystery man vibe with tragedy. One of the few MC to escape truck-kun. Well I don't know how it is going to go around but try to upload regularly so that we can check this out.
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Oh look what we have here. An interesting novel. Although the summary may be similar to the rest of the novels, the events are different. We have a novel that has a prequel. Good luck to you and keep up your work.
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This story is so beautiful and hot. It is well written and I recommend it.
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It was WN suggestion and I love it, just bunch read to the end of all my coins and no regress π€
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Okay this has potential to rival the top books in webnovel as i can see the wat it's going and I like it moreover, the mc isn't a wimp and he is actually motivated to be someone great in this life
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Iβm hooked! I just started reading this novel today but itβs good!! Great job Author!
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I would have rated it more had you only joined the Supreme Side, not Strongest. Strongest is overrated bruh haha! Joking! Looks good, good luck in your endeavor and may lots of readers check it out!
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The heart shift's is the story connected to the book, You broke Me First (Omegaverse). If the readers is looking for the other details mentioned in this book, please read You Broke Me First (Omegaverse)
Dorothy and the Codex of Forbidden Secrets