Becoming Immortal

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Gardenia,山栀子
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  • Status: Upcoming

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0)

Heartlessly, she tried in vain to seduce him into destroying his cultivation.


“I heard Lin-niang, the young daughter from the Zhao family, had her heart ripped out by something, then tossed in the river to die.”

“Who said that? She’s not dead!”

“Her heart was ripped out, how could she not be dead?”

Not only was Lin-niang still alive, her personality had changed drastically. Dressing in vibrant reds and greens, she wandered along the banks of the black river day and night.

People said she was possessed, that she had lost her soul.

On a foggy and rainy day, a cleanly dressed, elegant-looking young cultivator came to the village to offer free medical consultations.

A few villagers helped the Zhao couple to bring Lin-niang to the cultivator’s bench.

Beyond the eaves, the raindrops pitter-pattered on the ground. The cultivator reached out to remove the talisman on her forehead and asked her: “What is your name?”

She recalled that when she was napping at the bottom of the black river, she heard a scholar reciting this poem —

“The divine pill stops Heng’e* from aging, desperate for a way to preserve beauty.”

She didn’t know what it meant.

But she smiled slowly. “My name is Ah Heng”

She was not Lin-niang, but a naturally-formed evil spirit.

Ah Heng wanted this mortal cultivator’s heart, to fill the hole in the chest of her new body.


Cheng Jing Zhu was a student of the Palace of Pure Amethyst Clouds. Shouldering the heavy responsibility of the Hall of Medicine, he ventured out into the world to alleviate mortal suffering for the first time. Then, he met Ah Heng.

Dressed in bright red and green, she was forcefully brought to his bench. She smiled innocently at him. Ever since then, she constantly revolved around him.

Everyone said that Ah Heng was pitiful for falling in love with a cultivator.

No, she was not pitiful at all.

Cheng Jing Zhu knew that, hidden underneath her human skin, was the root of an evil spirit.

I love her. 

I know she wants my heart. 

But I — will never give it to her.


The gods are faceless. All rules come from the heart.



*T/N Heng’e = Chang’e

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  1. FavouriteReader
    FavouriteReader rated it
    Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via shirleymiller@ficseek.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
  1. B0mbaCl0ck
    B0mbaCl0ck rated it
    A hypothetical novel where even the author doesn't know what he writes after writing a chapter. Totally a waste of time.I mean MC extracted all the toxins in his body with the system and a few chapters later he got a pill which extracted his toxins.what is the use of System if it cannot do anything??
  1. KaiserEvil
    KaiserEvil rated it
    I was reading this and I liked it but when it comes to shitty systems it me it's just another power fantasy system trash novelIf it was that everyone has their own "status"  in the world and can see them as if it was "world laws" it would have been much better although I would like it more if that was not the case it would just turn it into isekai RPGAnd also killing things for experience is just another trash plotAnyways This is just my personal opinionI have a great dislike towards the system novelsBy the way I appreciate author's efforts to write a novel
  1. Krackers
    Krackers rated it
    You have to pay to see all the chapters that’s just the worst and It is a really good story so far sad I’m going to have to drop it from the 41 chapters onwards you have to gift something if you want to see the full chapter.That just sucks that’s why it’s such a low rating for me if you have the money would recommend but as a brook dude I can’t buy it.
  1. TeLLer_taLes
    TeLLer_taLes rated it
    "What did you do?"
  1. grasina18
    grasina18 rated it
    "I want to dance."
  1. axczzx
    axczzx rated it
    -Bandido: "Rays! It's a letter from Sabo "
  1. PurpleGeniusdUf
    PurpleGeniusdUf rated it
    E: hindi pala? Anong iniiyak-iyak mo?

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