I Bought a Girl

Got me invested in the story and then it hasn't been updated for weeks now. wasted my time reading up till now because author abandoned the story before it even really kicked off. the number of chapters is just an illusion to the real length of the story... it had potential but the author ended up dropping it

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

the thing that rlly bothers me about this novel is the inconsistency in the story and how everyone and their mothers are so gung-ho about pk-ing that its just a major turn off from the story. Like how you would skip the parts about the mc dungeoning and the spend 4-7 chapters about him getting pk-ed or mc pk-ing. the plot inconsistency is rlly bugging me out, like how you plotted out the story beforehand and then when u go to write it its nothing like the story you plotted out already, and more of just sitting down and improvising the whole thing. there was something i was rlly looking forward to later in the novel but all of a sudden getting that event pulled out from under my nose made me deduct major points from this novel. and idk about anyone else but when i read a novel about a game i like seeing the numbers, equip stats, player stats, dmg numbers and stuff like that. but having it all suddenly disappear for like 70 chapters only to have it reappear for like 2-3 chapters rlly grinds my gears(200 something chapters as of this review) most annying part is when u read the story it skips around and back like u forgot to mention something and just decided that all of a sudden it becomes canon. u cant be like "wow he just soloed a boss thats higher level than him" to all of a sudden "o hes not strong enough to take this boss on yet" inconsistency is the key if that was fixed id totally be onboard to continue reading but for now its a no for me.(** if this doesnt count as contructive criticism and gets deleted will be posting it multiple times till it doesnt)

****,,,this is garbage, [I dont like rape],,,,,,,,,,its exactly like the tags,,,,be warned.....writer goes through with what he promises,, the MC is a rapist The chps are long, the writing quality is decent, and SD is okay......, just gave 1 star to CD cause MC is trash, like dude is a rapist, yes I am bias, but to be fair, I just feel sad for the lost potential cause of the rapy MC,,,I mean dude is raizel from nobelesse.....would've been a dope SI.**: if yah write about a not rapy MC, maybe a proper villain [not nut like joker but villian like....Mr.cold or someone with purpose or something], or a proper SI FF, rather than a perverted MC...do tell me...anyway GL author.......

it's amazing so looking forward to more, this story entered my top 10 for sure!!!I highly recommend it to the guys!!!Looking forward to more, I sure hope it becomes a webtoon in the future.

hello, here the author's shameless reviews.this is my first novel. so, I hope your pointer and contstructive reviews.English is not my native language, so there will be bound grammatical  errors and typos. but of course, I will my best and try to improve myself as long as the story goes on.I hope you enjoy and like it.Thank you for your time.

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Why haven't I encountered this novel before? this is gem and a five star review from your one and only Awesp—ShinGotLost!!!