Walking the Path of a Workaholic in Cliché Novels (QT) Chapter v2 Discussion

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Based on the description, you could say the novel might have a harem-ish type of story or involve 2 or more love interests that An Yinyong (Mc) might get paired with, and that's what I thought so too. However there's barely any potential rivals for ML in the 1st and 2nd Arc.

My main problems with the story:

I think the Arcs (aka the worlds An Yinyong transmigrates to) are fine, there I say really well written. It's just that they overstay their welcome.

Each arc would range up to 40-50 chapters, which makes the story feel really slow-paced and dull. Though they are very well written, especially the second arc when An Yinyong had to experience what it was like to survive and live in tough situations dueing ancient times. The writing comes off a very realistic because An Yinyong shows that he cares for the people around him, but doesn't try to help them because he can't afford to. He, in a surface level, comes off as selfish and cold-hearted but I think the author does a very good job on portraying his actions as valid rather than coming off as selfish.

And although the Arc is very well written, it really couldn't have been that long. I skipped a few chapters of both the first and second Arc and it barely effected the story. I didn't have the patience of reading this novel any longer and dropped it by the start of Arc 3.

Overall, 3.9/5. The writing was great but the majority of information and lines here shouldn't be needed.

Some warnings ahead, there are multiple mentions of death, su*cide and cannibalism in Arc 2.
 
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this story is confusing, the scene is not very clear
 
  • #3
I’m loving this book and I like that the characters are so relatable.......
 
  • #5
SOO SOO GOOD .. ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR NEW CHAPTERS ... UGG ..
 
  • #6
So far I'm really enjoying the dramatic twists, Ethan has such a captivating aura, I myself fell for his charm ... the suspense here is a 10/10, great job author
 
  • #7
LOVE IT..... I Just hope Good Novel will consider this to have an audio like the other books cassandra had
 
  • #9
it's not that he does that he does thag once in a blue moon when may be he has some some misunderstandings but no he does that one chapter after another even if a male is standing besides her he will misunderstand looks like he has a habit of Doing this ..he is the other hand is..
 
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