This is very interesting! I liked Theo, eventhough he isn't male lead, my heart is with him, he is cute and caring and trustworthy too.....I hope he and fl could end up together .... can't wait to read more

Hi, cherished writer, I recently read your book and found it to be really fascinating. What tactics did you employ to get it widely read and go viral?

It's a nice story ,heart touching story, I want to read all chapter, please update fast for us ❣️❣️❣️ you are best writer, all good wishes for you ❣️❣️❣️❣️,take care of yourself and be safe 👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶

If you follow us, you'll know that we're not into stories like these. But here we have Missnormal, who seems to wish to delve into her writing skills. Let's see what she has to offer.So the premise goes like this: survival is a challenge where a cruel game is mandated by a lottery system that selects teenagers to battle terrifying creatures. Hunger games? Nope. Divergent? Let's chill out now. Here we have the MC, Olivia, who seems like an ordinary girl until she's betrayed by her own family and forced into the game. What's the catch, author? Oh, she has a system. Ya know, those magic translucent prompts that pop up.While only five chapters in, it's evident things can get emotional. You'll know what we mean if you understand Freya's character. Again... Hunger Games, anyone?Now, there are tons of spacing issues that need to be addressed. The grammar, while not terrible, could also be improved for smoother reading. This tells us that Missnormal is still somewhat new when it comes to writing. I'll guess that she's a young adult, which is not bad.What might stand out about this story is it somewhat tackles the notion of how to survive a society structured around the powerful versus powerless. Sort of sounds like earth!

Hello!!! Fallen here 👋👋 I really like hearing praises but if you like to be a critic, I'm in for that too but please don't be too harsh...🥺🥺🥺

Too much dog blood. Well, it's not unexpected because the author's previous works was the same. It's just I disagree with how the author romanticized crime. Please webnovel, I don't really expect you to pick novel with less dog blood. But please, some novel like this must be excluded from range of selection.

Good start power system is very interesting zero seems like a cool character even though it’s his first scene looks very promising story telling

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book

The author unleashed his writing superpowers in this novel. It is action-filled and I find Li Fei *cool*Highly recommended and I can't wait for another update

So far there are four chapters which are all really solid, the story seems to be developing steadily and is really a fun read. (if Hailey Welch can blow up this novel/book best blow up as well)

How can authors ruin the story with one chapter is beyond my understanding… Dont get me wrong, the novel is great, good read, but why the f… When the general is treathening MC, he just flops and joins the military just cuz his sister was kidnapped??? And then the story for me just went downhill… i mean The MC just 10 chapters ago understood that the worlds are merging, and he is strong af, but he flops under the first pressure?? Thats just idiotic development. Up to 140 chapters are really tood read and then i just can’t read stupidity.

It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.