After reading so far, I did not find any problems at all. The grammars are and there seems to be no problem at all. The story was also very well written, great job author.

This one is actually BETTER than the other one and has improved a lot (mainly cause zxl is proofreading and editing) i believe this guys updating each day right now? anyways as the story progresses the world background also gets clearer new characters and good plot(for now idk if it gets better or not, im a pioneer in the disc so i get rights to read some non edited parts) but yeah recommend read not too fast except the time skips ahem ahem

Nice! This is very much nice. It’s a perfect story worth all of our attention.

I really liked it, hoping it continues like this and the quality doesn't decline..............................................................

I know I'm a shameless writer, IDK think I should give myself 4 stars Guys I think I should give myself this much lol I mean if don't, who will?

oh can't wait for the next chapters. I'm so curious how they ended up there!

The writing is good, the story is good, everything is quite the novel in my opinion i suppose, I'm going to have high hopes for this novel because i already liked the first five chapters, yes, past-paced and many years went by as the MC regress infinitely, gotta love it.and due to the fact instead of dying to many things like.. shot, trampled, suicide like that, the MC literally just died in an dangerous earthquake, and got Isekaied in the world he is now.pretty a recommended read to my opinion again, I'm used to reading isekai novels and this is by far the best fresh story i have ever bumped on to, pretty vigilant and adventurous, the world building is going to be crazy and the story development with some plot development may come closer in the future, and the fact that the houses are in the mid euros.. fascinating, i can easily imagine.

Why should you guys try this story?『Smart Mc 、Smart side character also NPC、 Smart Girls 、No pervert. Always stand on business. Ruthless and Forgiveness both side、And yes Gender Equality for punishment 🤷🏻』1. The author doesn’t waste time and consistently gives us chapters every week.2. He/She always explains everything unless it’s a #spoiler.3. This is a story about kingdom-building, but you should try it because our MC doesn’t need anything—he alone is 'The Cursed One' and also 'The unpredicted one'(proclaimed by me, not the author).4. The MC doesn’t waste time on unnecessary things like chit-chat or love interests (so far).5. Although I prefer not to have a harem, it’s the author’s choice, and I can’t stop them, so I have to respect their opinion.6. The naming is very easy. But I have to say, the author should create an auxiliary volume where they explain every character’s name and power, like other authors do.7. Although I prefer 2,000 words per chapter, it’s too early to say. But I think within one month, the author can adapt to writing more.8 . Hope Everyone should give it a try.

First of all, I want to give a round of applause to such great work😎😎 I love how the female lead was portrayed...really helpful on my own work

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Ok, I have to say, I’m really enjoying this story so far! Taryn is such a strong lead, but what I love most is how real she feels—like she’s tough, but you can tell she’s got layers and struggles she’s working through. And Lucien… whew. That guy is equal parts infuriating and charming. Their dynamic is so fun to read because you never know if they’re going to argue or actually start trusting each other (maybe both?).The cursed chain thing is such a cool idea—it’s constantly throwing them into situations where they can’t avoid each other, which keeps the tension high. The world-building is solid, too. I love how the danger feels real, but the story still makes time for little character moments that make you care about what happens next.If you’re into stories with strong leads, reluctant partnerships, and a slow-burn kind of tension, I’d definitely recommend this. Can’t wait to see what happens next! There is smut too if you stick with it. Slow burn and all. lol

Great narration, great characterization, I like the MC that was introduced so far! Going to marinate this first before reading it whole. So far I love the chapter 1 ^^)/