Traveling Between Dimensions

Man.. I think its a bad idea to release 2 soccer novels at the same time.. Its a conflict of interest. Also, tbh I never watch sports anime, so I don't want to read sports anime either. But... I really want to read the fish novel lol... It looks like a stupid novel that I would enjoy.Also why am I supposed to rate when there is no prologue or anything given...?

This review is based until chapter 70.The story is really slow. the grammar is ok except the author doesn’t know how to use the correct pronoun. he keeps on using ‘they’  or ‘their’ when he’s only referring to a single person. this usually confuse me because i always thought that he was talking about a group of people. He also keeps on referring to other chars as noble this noble that, half elf this half elf that. It should be a name in order for us to remember who is who. for me there’s a lot of filler chapters in here. the mc seems to be like a minOr char here. tImothy seems to be the mc here. i dont know.

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Great read, looking forward to more of it, I quite like the interesting storyline and premise the author went with and can't wait to see how it goes.

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The story is fast paced with mutant gorillas and everything else mutant. Think X-men, sliders and a system meshed together in one action based novel.