Nice job so far! It seems pretty interesting and I'm looking forward to you continuing to flesh everything out and build a world that stands out from others.

............................................................................................................................This is 5 stars for a new writer, good luck with your first novel. However, I'm not sure you'll finish this one :)

I wish there were more chapters. I already really like the misunderstanding part, it feels like Zeno is really talented in acting. It's enjoyable.

I love it reminds me of cultivation online and I’m super down for that your gonna get a lot of coins from me in the future lol please keep going and don’t stop please Love~ reaper

the first chapters are weird but the last chapters are good ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

A good story so far! I do hope that Yoon ah would be able to find someone who loves her for who she truly is. Loving it so far. Keep it, author💝

I can't explain but I think 3,8 is good one for it and I well see if you can make me up it to 4

This novel has the best intro , the best detail description and writing style.I am in love with the ML!The plot is interesting .This it the first time my head hurt from having a hard time keeping up with the details, LOL ! Never have I ever read a book like this ! This goes straight to my library !I will read it when I want to learn more about robots , shield and military staff!

Your novel has potential, though I read till 20 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....

I like how this novel starts off incredibly dark, deviating from the typical transmigration processes that I’ve seen in many, many other media.The world building is nice, and the writing is very well done. I only wish there were more chapters so that I could give a more detailed review.That aside, good job so far, author.

it's the best novel I've ever read, more chapters please

great book so far waiting for the author new chapters the chapters might be short but it's a banger!