Silent Descent: Retrieval

I'm cool with everything concerning the novel, the world is the best. the MC is very wise and he doesn't, and his symbiot is wise as well. As long as there is no harem, then I'll always be one of the top supporters

It´s an really interesting story, and has a high potential, but the writer still needs much more practise. The scenen changes are too quick and comes almost unannounced. Most of the time I am thinking, "What is now going on?" only to find out that there happened a scene change. The characters are partly interesting, but to plain and especially the MC is a bit unsteady in his behavouir. First he wants not to be used, then he goes with the flow just because of something. What´s the most unnerving ist the too quick development. Parts aren´t really good explained and not as exciting as they could be. Especially i would wish that the parts in them something gets explanied to other characters, like where they explain that he got that invitation in chapter 40, would a bit more elaborate. The last thing is the grammar, there are a lot places where there should be comma´s and so on. In the end it is really good material for an good story, but it got bad realised..

Overall the first 40 chapters were great and I was prepared to dig in and get invested but then I turn to chapter 41 and the quality (translation) immediately took a step of a cliff and plummeted before preceding to blow up into a flaming pile of $#$& aaaaaa I hate it it was so good is there anywhere that translates it properly I’m actualy thinking of paying.

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At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me.Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!

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Really good book with a bit of mystery and some love in between that mystery, it makes people intrigue, and also it piques the interest of a person to see what will happen next.This book really gave a different direction to a romantic story and it really fantasizes, the storyline has the vibe of mystery and some unknown factors which makes people more interested in the book.....I wish the author success and prosperity with this book...Thank you 👍🏻😘😍