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Unsamani
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Agree with the others that the MLIs terrible, but what can expect? The low rating is for 3 reasons. 1) only 16 open chapters ??? Seriously it should 2) it is taking way too long to setup the face slapping. 3) I seriously dislike how 2 face the mother is. Her character automatically prevents the happily ever after scenario between FL and any of the Lu brothers. Who would want her as a MIL?!?
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So will the MC share his harem or will he have girls that don’t sleep with other guys ? I’m not a fan of NTR or netorase
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So, I've read up to what only has been released so far which is chapter 20. And I'm not much or at all of a romance person. But I can say I enjoyed this for it's descriptive explanations when its going over the background and how the characters feel and their surroundings. I definitely enjoyed the discrepancy of it. It felt as if this was happening in real life as I was reading this. So the imagination and fantasy is definitely there. Which it on its own is amazing, because it shows that I was immersed into the story. I love how you write at the end of the chapter on the author's thoughts about the summary of each chapter going on. One thing I do wish though, was that some parts of the story would be more fast paced. It felt fast paced for the first five chapters of the story and then it felt as if it dropped for a portion of it. But that's my own preference. But for the most part the characters are adept and seemingly real in their emotions and how they act.
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Heloooo everyoneeee!Author's here. :)As you all might know, my name is Kaito Arise (pronounced as Eris) and this is my first ever book that I had published. This book is going to be a light novels, so maybe around 30 chapter or so. I'm doing this writting stuff as a side hustle, but dont worry because I have finished writting this story. Just stay tuned for it to get publish, okay. :)Im thinking of creating a bunch of other light novels as well. Because of that, I need a support from all of you guys. Your support means a lot to me and it giving me enough moral support to keep on cooking exciting stories. See you guys around! If you can, kindly leave a review about this story.Me when you rate five star:
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Great book with very good potential so far. There is a nice balance of suspense and surprises along the way and good worldbuilding and character development. I really like the uniqueness of this novel, and I feel it has plenty of room to develop new and interesting concepts.
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This book have many of its own unique setting such as beast, goddess, and many races. I can only say it was a good good book with interesting plot.Just why I’ve see author using “he” and “she” on the same character 🫠Because of your update stability shocked me, imma give you a pizza 🍕, hope your novel got better and remember get enough rest before you start writing.
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This is going to be interesting, definitely following this one after reading your first completed book. Hoping for more chapter updates.
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私が知る限り最もセクシーな作家が書いた skibidi rizzler ohio rizz
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Exceptional, ecstatic and a really good novel to keep your mind buried in after a stressed day. I love how its context is similar to roman or greek midieval times and its emphasis on loyalty. Keep it up🙌🏽
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I love the world-building, but redundancy should be taken care of. The writing style is good, though I suggest minimizing the detailed physical descriptions of every character
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Can't wait to expand more on the world and universe, the characters and power systems. kind of rushed it in the beginning but there's so much more planned.
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I try to make a chapter a day; if not, I will upload a chapter the next day without question...I must give myself a decent rating; I'm writing the darn thing. I hope that out of everything this story does, it's at least interesting. Thank you to anyone who checks it out.
Where Heart Wanders