i have really enjoyed the story so far. i really can't wait until the world finally merges. Because I'm excited for some action to happen.

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I wonder why u didnt get enoug ratings ..the book is really great mate...i find it very interesting and a unique topic too

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I just came through this story at first I thought it was a not that good but after reading chapter 1 and the system thing in chapter 2 I found it interesting and look forward to chapter 3

I love the world this shows and, how unsettling it is.Complete honesty 9/10It gives me fear of what happenes next for some reason, i dont know if its because im reading it . havent felt fear like this in any horror movie i have watched.Honestly flabbergasted at how good this is, excited and expecting more great content.I could say that the summary at the end may need a bit more work.Like i would like to see as time goes on the summary gets more deteriorated and unhinged.But thats just what i may like to see you do you, cuz up untill now you havent dissapointed.                             -best of regards,                                                                Abhi

I really love this story. The characters, the dinamic between them plus the action is awesome. The only small issue i have with it it's the inconsistent pacing(sometimes is too fast like jumping events plus one aabrupt timeskip while other Times is so slow that it feels like You could sometimes jump one or 2 chapters and barely see any discontinuity with the story)

I read the first few chapters and I wanted to like it because it wasn't an isekai story or re-incarnation. there are spots where I have had to go back over to understand what happened cause it seems like paragraphs were just dropped out. Affinity is a huge deal in the beginning and a deal breaker for everyone to not become an adventurer. it is pretty consistent on the whole you die part. so his first fight is something out of his league even by the story standards and he wins. gets a couple levels and then takes on something 8x his level. if you want a story where the mc is essentially dragged kicking and screaming to success by plot armor you might like this.

This is an interesting shelter story with more interesting scenes then most others. I hope we can get more chapters though as there isn’t a lot.

Right now, author has made the effort to improve his or her writing, and while its still jumping from here to there. It is still a good and relaxing story so far.The Updates that the author promised of 2-4 chapters is being keep, but it’s more like it’s being keep at 2 chapters every day.Story development is not great, but it’s not bad either. At most, I can tell that the author at least has a direction to head towards to.Character designs on the other hand, the cover is good but if we went with description of a the characters in the novel itself, only the character “Mirelle” has been describe. I hope to see a proper cover in the future and a description of the main character in the future. I still don’t know her name. Lol.The world feels alive at the very least. It isn’t as alive as LOTM since it’s just the start of the story, but with the recent chapters, it kinda feels alive. Like it feels a bit deep. I hope the world gets more alive and more deep as the story continues.If this continues to be free for another 10 to 15 chapters, I might review it again later.

This story is fantastic! I highly recommend giving it a try. You'll find yourself completely captivated. One aspect I particularly love is Ace's unwavering confidence when making decisions.

Shynobi here! This novel has around 10 books. I have already drafted the first 5 books. Book 1 is already done. I don't know how many chapters this will take, but I hope that you guys will like this book. It is a world-building book with intrigue, adventure, and love mixed in the middle.Please give me your comments guys! Thank you!