The Adventures of Sir L Dick

Want some more i think you got a great start of the story, you could ad some bad luck to the mc so that he get some change, in his go lucky attitud to his powers.

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Started off really well the idea of reincarnation with knowledge of a game that transpired to be the biggest online community that has many ways of making real money from exchanging in game currency in which many actual companies get involved in.As you progress through the story you’ll get very excited to see our MC power up and it’s almost addictive! Until however it gets to the point where it’s now boring and very much so repetitive! The dungeons become plain and the MC loses what you thought was his character and becomes this sexual deviant who gets constantly pushed around by women! Which from the start is a complete 180 degree turn of his original character or so you would think. For some ungodly reason the author has lost all reason and decided to forsake morality and sexualise women to the point that it’s ridiculous!! There is a scene where he has *** with his teacher and it was supposedly a big deal ect, I was fine with that scene since it was the first although the translator added a bit more making it a little graphic I liked the rawness of that sexual encounter and I thought that it brought us even closer to the MC but sure enough that’s all it became. I really liked this book I was even a Patreon for 2 months, but I needed canceling my patronage half way through the 2nd month. This book is down right degrading and a 5 year old probably wrote the last 400 chapters (except the R+18 content of course) I’m thankful for the translations and I really wish them the best of luck but if you have any moral value whatsoever I’d steer clear of this one!

I was sure the author had 500 chapters on gravity a couple weeks ago as it transitioned to here. Now have to wait another few months for it to catch up to current. I keep getting more and more disappointed with webnovel and its bs. Whether it's stealing translations done by others when they get shutdown and then profiting to charging insane amounts for novel translations that can be dropped at any point with no guarantees. Translators went from under payed to over payed. These authors  wouldn't have the visibility they currently have if it wasn't for the communities in the first place, and now they are too greedy.

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Great story. Rewrite has fixed minor errors in the world building but have they weren’t that big to begin with. Keep up the good work. Can’t wait for more chapters.

Overall not bad. I read up to 54 but I'll be dropping it. It seems like it's a copy of Tales of Demons and Gods story in similar cultivation, MC, the world being only a little part of the whole thing, and dark spirit guys. Also please look into getting an editor or someone to clean up spelling errors, grammar, and fixing the overall flow.

Introduce the club and history at the start it's situations, the timeline should have been the first thing mentioned. the transfers and the amounts are unrealistic. the timeline is completely off there's no mention of when Ferran, Lewandowski or Gundogan were signed. the author forgot that the season began late that year because of Copa America and Euro.