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PratapJi
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- July 1,2024
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Who else is refreshing for the next chapter? I need more!""I love how the main character is developing! What do you guys think will happen next?""That cliffhanger was cruel! I need answers!
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Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further
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i mean. This is a great novel, dark, gritty and thrilling. it's intricate and well crafted, the narrative is incredible. overall, it's just having three chapters at the time of this review and i think it's quite good.Highly recommend!!
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I love it I only read two chapters and i am already captivated Good job dear janeeeee
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After reading the synopsis, I was intrigued—the concept behind the work is pretty good. There are few novels in this genre, and with that in mind, I started reading. So far, the quality of the writing and the interaction between the characters are solid. I have high expectations. I don't enjoy R18 stories where they spend all their time under the sheets without working on the context behind it. I'm finding what I'm looking for in this work, and I’m sure it could become a high-quality doujin.
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I’m starting to really enjoy this keep it up, it gives a different feel to the other stories even though it seem a bit cliche I’m ready for how you approach this story.
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I liked a lot this story. There are very few novels with fairies and even fewer where they are perv fairies... i like that mc interacts with others and his fairies. It also shown that while he has not realized his phisical body affected his mind making him mlre childish in some aspects... cannot wait what kinky se* stuff he does qith the fsiries and his 2 familiars... the rab it and frustrated darl elf can wait xd
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Five stars because I would shamelessly glaze my own work as the author.—WHAT TO EXPECT/REMEMBER—[1] SEMI-SLOWBURN:If what you want is an action-packed story like there's a fight scene every three to four chapters, then let me inform you—this story probably isn't your cup of tea, so instead of throwing a tantrum why "There's barely any fight in this sht!
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The start starts good but at the middle the author just starts copying entire paragraphs or describing the same scene in a single chapter multiple times.
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I like the world building and I love the theme. First chapter instantly got me hooked. Keep up the good work!Also, there are parts in the first chapter that are unreadable. Maybe it's because of my settings as I am in dark mode, but you should use just one color.
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Fantastic novel and a great read. You will love it.
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Overall good start with great potential some dialogues feel cliche though but its pretty interesting and unique, lets see where it goes in future.
Naruto : The Frost Reaper