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AcramLumumba
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- July 1,2024
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a review would be nice guys or comments per chapter π or should i stick to reading mahnwa? π€£ but i felt like i should finish what i started.. i still have 3 chapters left that i have to edit. but oh.. my wifi would be cut later at midnight.. what should i do? ππ should i upload it all.. or keep it until my wifi came on.. i dont know when will i able to pay it.. maybe if you give me some review even saying my story is crappy and some love and encourage me, i'll pay my wifi immediately. then upload the 3 chapters simultaneously. oh well.. what to do.. ππ€
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Good Novel My Friend.Great potential.....
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Strong debute. Hope to disclose more of the story!
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it's good but not connecting with eachother
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I am enjoying the novel but why isn't anyone talking about plot hols. The timings of events are confusing of minor things many times or are not explained. It disrupts my mind from the actual reading.
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I've never been much of a robot fan, but I really like how you bring the technical language closer to laypeople and do it all in an understandable and charismatic way! I love reading Machina Arcanis and my inner geek totally had a crush on Nohrell. X_X
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Overall the writing and the fluency us well .The character needs to develop some moreover energy and spark as people will love it. Hope he gets a good ending . .I'm still reading so don't dissapoint me!! Well the start is overall same as other dramatic novels but I liked the concept ..
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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars.I would love any feedback you guys can give. This is my third original novel, with the first one still ongoing. Feel free to also treat this as a Q/A session.
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good story good wishes i would also wish something like this mc
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Awesome book, author. keep it up.I'm going to support your book no matter what.
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This story is simply... author is him π£π₯No harem? Good, well-balanced power system? Excellent, but the mystery is beyond that, sheesh. I liked the character development, there's more to see yet, I liked Logan, the mad researcher too, But not many Kang Woo moments are shown, where is Kang Woo π£π£10/10
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