Seaborne Empire

Well as I was reading ist I got a mega headache, there are brainless people left and right and so on I like the genre but this novel is the worst I have read so far.

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Nice book. Good synopsis. Not your normal gaming world. A a must read for all gamers. You'd love this one. Also author please update more....... Nice writing style, good world background. Keep it up.

It is still early days but this is a good but fairly cliche story so far.  The most obvious issue is the desperate need of an editor.  Not just for grammar/spelling assistance but also to help cut out unneeded duplication.  For example, we don't need to see the character screen that many times when literally nothing has changed.

looks pretty good, I personally will read this as it's wrote, yup good stuff. Get your yuri and cuteness, oh I love my kawaii lovers! come check this out!

This story started off pretty promising with  interesting characters. unfortunately this story suffers really hard from having a million female characters to balance. they all eventually become a one dimensional horny character that thinks almost of nothing else other than sex and semen. All the "conflict" he had is very short lived and mc characters has a serious wuxia syndrome being really overpowered. None if his powers does not feel earned and its just a really overindulgence male sex fantasy. its a real shame it turned out like this.

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