- #10
In VK, the *vampire* part, Yuukis accendence came at the proposed time when a major plot device was introduced to bring back. The *knight* part was delayed far, far, far too late. How as a writer can you have such a flimsy story line as to allow the LT to continue for too long, as stated by numerous other posters here, to the point where Zeki shippers were left on tenterhooks until chapter 89 of 93 to finally be shot down with *that* scene. It's rediculous. If the LT had been affectively neutered during the time skip it would have been far easier to stomach for all involved and reading the rest would have been edible. As it is now, its like warm sour milk. Horrible to look at and even worse to digest and smell ...
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As for the "lapdog" scenario ... how is he not? Forget points of view and opinions. Look at the cold hard facts. Lost his parents to vampires. Vampires released by Kaname ... Kaname knew of Yuukis past and strived to not wake her and left this responsibility to Zero during the day because he could not ... The story in the second arc is just convoluted and in disarray. Zero making his own choices is a Get out of Jail Free card played to make it appear he is moving on. It's a cheap plot device to apparently end his seething hatred of vampires ... More overly purebloods, but honestly I can't see it ... It wouldn't have happened this way and somehow I get the impression Hino knew this when she ran the LT too far beyond being acceptable.
I really agree with this.
The people who dislike Zero always point to Zero's hatred for vampires as a reason not to like him. He can't let go; he can't move on. As a fan of the character, I also wanted him to let go and move on. It would have been better for him as a person, and it would have gotten the *knight* part of the story moving much sooner.
HOWEVER, we now find out the ugly truth of it all: Zero's hatred for vampires was necessary for the love triangle.
Because he was needed for a terrible love triangle, Zero couldn't let go of his hatred for vampires any sooner than this. The main impediment to Zeki was Zero's hatred. If Zero accepted vampires, accepted Yuuki, and accepted himself, but still couldn't be with Yuuki, then that would be the end of Zeki. No more love triangle, Zero is free to move on to bigger and better things.
And that's exactly what happened in chapter 92. Zero seemingly accepts his vampire nature. He promises not to run away from his feelings for Yuuki anymore and essentially forgives Kaname (more on this later). But none of that was to run into Yuuki's arms, it was to push Kaname toward her. Love triangle broken.
Hurrah! Now Zero gets ONE CHAPTER to be *the knight*. (And actually, I fear he's not even going to get that much since I got the feeling the manga was pretty much done with him after his big scene with Kaname.)
Zero could have accepted his feelings for Yuuki and moved on in ANY chapter of the manga after the time skip. There was no big event here in 92 that caused him to change his mind. Yuuki didn't suddenly prove herself to him or anything like that. He just changed his mind to change his mind. Why not make that happen sooner?
And this is the other part of the problem: If Zero's hatred for vampires was what kept the love triangle going, then Zero giving up his hatred was the move used to legitimize the other pairing.
Of all the characters in the manga, Zero has the most reason to dislike Kaname. But by having Zero reach out to Kaname (and in that gesture, essentially forgive him of his crimes), then all of us get to feel OK about a KanaYuuki ending because gosh! Zero is making his own decisions!
How naive and foolish. It would have been far more realistic for Zero to give up his hatred of vampires and have an unspoken tolerance for Kaname simply for Yuuki's sake. He didn't need to reach out to Kaname. Because Kaname's crime against Zero was too great for him to forgive (no one in Zero's position would ever forgive the person who destroyed his family), and because Kaname never asked for Zero's forgiveness, so it wasn't necessary for Zero to grant it.
So the mangaka should have just left it alone. It would have been kinder to Zero's character. But no. Instead Zero not only asks Kaname to fight with him (as a comrade), but he insists it's his own choice to protect Kaname and pushes him toward Yuuki.
Why make Zero go so far, if not for Zero's sake? Because all of this is essentially giving Kaname permission to live at the end of the series. (Can't have a happy, shippy ending without him.) If Kaname's biggest victim forgives him, then the character no longer needs redemption. There's nothing Kaname needs to make up for anymore. Aidou's dad is alive and Zero is making his own decisions!
As someone who wanted MORE from this series than pairings, and who wanted MORE from Zero than to just be the foil to a love triangle (the Kuran's lapdog), it is very, very depressing.