the story is great, I like it but the updates take too long, I’m growing old waiting, even though "rebirth" is my favorite genre, and this book provides exactly what I want, however, I still can't give it 5 stars for the update frequency.

I can't wait to see where this one goes.I greatly liked your prior novels, and I think I ill like this one too. over all let's get this started

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It's not bad. The author has a grasp on storytelling, but the Asian "Brother Enzo" and "sister Ruby" in a supposedly Western setting gave me flashback icks. The  English is a bit awkward, and there's the odd grammar mistake, but nothing dreadful.The world building is decent, but as others say, the interpersonal interactions don't feel natural. They are stiff.I had to laugh at the "uniform". What make a transparent plastic swimsuit a uniform? But somehow, it has a pouch to put things in?  I mean other than what you would expect to find in a swimsuit "pouch

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Brother this is wild,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,You got me hooked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,These kinds novels are always peak,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The story is mehh so far, but i hope the MC will be cold and OP. If so, I'll stick with you through thick and thin Nanachi. oh and if you like this, check out DD

Its alright. Don't mind reading it everyday

This book is soooo good💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️.....I could read it all day🌹🌹✨✨✨✨

It's got a lot of potential but I can't stand the writing style (thats on me). The characters are a bit two-dimensional, they all seem to speak the same (in other words, it's like the author is speaking through them. They aren't quite their own people, ifykwim). I even skipped to the end but it doesn't seem to be fixed.The prose is all right even though it seems befitting for a trad novel. The plot develops at a normal pace. The vibes remind me of JJBA. I do hope the author fixes the formatting since it's hard to read on phone. In any case, I would recommend this book when it's reached a few hundred chapters.Good luck, author

I love the gore and violence. The heartless character of just throwing away those imps like they aren’t anything. I love it, very bloody so cool. And that finale scene after those two cultivation quests, so cool. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥