Her Tears Don’t Fall

I do not think I’ve made a review so here y’all can have one.I am a reader that comes from chapter 684 the current most out non-premium chapter.I absolutely fell in love with this book as you too will.Shakuni the protagonist reincarnated back in time by some years and started to play a VRMMORPG he had played his past life.The odds are almost always stacked against him, but shakuni is an absolute MASTERMIND who can turn any situation around. He his a genius leader, brilliant strategist, and an amazing combatant.This has kingdom building elements later on won’t go into too much detailShakuni (In game name, his IRL name is Rudra) ends up dating two girls as of now and will probably stay that way. One is a irl girl who plays the game with him. Another is lets say….an NPC.I truly urge you to try it and as a person who can’t binge read cause i’m caught up all I can say is it’s easier for y’all who can still binge read almost 700 chapters.This will be an adventure you will truly enjoy, trust me look at how many hours my profile says i’ve read so I think that gives me qualifications to tell you to TRY THE BOOK AND STOP READING MY REVIEW YOUR WASTING TIME WHAT IF YOU DIE NEXT WEEK?! Seriously though highly reccommended.P.S Author sticks to his promises if author says he will release 20 chapters upon reaching a goal he WILL release them(he’s done it before) We basically get daily bonus chapters due to powerstone goal too ngl

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So first off, the writing quality is fine, there is not too much problem with that, the updating quality is very good, tough the size of each chapter is small, so I think you should publish 1 chapter out of two or three small ones. The story development, as for now nothing has had really happened, the protagonist just stayed in his village training and writing, so I expect a quick development of it's quality, what you must do is not make it really fast forward nor too slow, just find the right amount, try get our interest with something like a tension.About the characters names now, don't just put a bit of every anime and make it a story, for example I don't think you should have named the protagonist Roronoa Zoro, it's just sound like someone who is obsessed with that character, same for Artoria, besides what are the chances of a Japanese to be named (with both the family name and the first name) like someone from Europe or Mexico.Then about the paragraph's space, don't make a huge thing, it's very easy to get lost.Finally about the world background, very poor for now so you should really work it from now on.

The grammar and punctuation could use more work. I could feel the pain of Daniel. The gods in all worlds are like that; cold, observing and uncaring.

Great story over all with sense of fresh touch in it compared to other cliche novels out there, i hope it got picked because i grow tired of the available books without any little bit of originality.REALY PLEASE PICK THIS UP !!!

Wow I just found it out yesterday and I was instantly hooked I hope you continue this and don't listen to the complaining of how the MC is retarded That one complaining is the retarded one

"Who are you?" I said cautiously

Oneka-senpai left and Mia-san got up to get ready. Within a few minutes, they were downstairs in the school uniform making my school lunch.