For someone whose native language is not English, I salute the writer and hope he continues, but I am a little sad that he does not write in Arabic because when I translate it automatically, the translation is very broken and the writer is from an Arab country, so...

it is good, but my problem with it is that you  Created a race, I know that it is powerful, but it does not make sense that you made them have few people because It is a race, and it should have more members not few, And you made it harder to recruit than other races. It is a territory, and it cannot just have a few people defending it. From what I can see, it doesn't look like this novel will go far. It looks like it would be dropped at one point because the word view has collapsed.

Ava girl! I’m rooting for you cuz all I see is treachery!

This Webnovel has left me breathless, emotionally drained, and craving more.The world-building is incredibly immersive, with a richly detailed landscape that transported me to a realm of wonder and magic.The plot is good, it keeps you on edge. The pacing is well-balanced, with moments of tender introspection and heart-pumping action.If you're looking for a Webnovel that will captivate, inspire, and maybe even break your heart a little, then CRUCIBLE OF SHADOWS is an absolute must-read.

Not very bad, i like where the story heading at.i love the characters all different with many personalities the suspense is also in track not missing out

As an obligatory part of the process, authors are apparently required to rate their own work 5 stars! (Just kidding… 😆)First and foremost, thank you so much for reading my work—whether you loved it, hated it, or fell somewhere in between.  If you’ve already read the novel, you’ll likely notice heavy inspiration from the iconic manga/anime Hunter x Hunter. And yes, that’s absolutely intentional!  That series is one of the greatest stories I’ve ever encountered, and it’s the reason I started writing in the first place. To honor it, I’m building an entirely original world from scratch while adding my own unique twists. Fingers crossed I can pull this off and actually finish the series without burning out…  If you haven’t experienced Hunter x Hunter yet, I highly recommend reading or watching it! It’ll give you a clearer idea of the vibe I’m aiming for—and trust me, it’s 100% worth your time.

Muy interesante, no había leído una novela que se trate sobre Dios o ángeles y cosas así veamos que le va, iré apoyando de apoco a ver si sacas más capitulos.

Another masterpiece. I can't wait to read about  Xavier's backstory. Alice is the best!! ..................................................................................................

A great novel. It has a striking start not lingering on an extended prologue which can bore people. It gets right to it which is good. the quality of writing is pretty good and the plot pacing is excellent. Character design is okay, but only a few chapters so far so I'm assuming we will get more into the mc and side characters soon. World background is pretty well done, and keeps the reader hooked.Great job so far author!

I tried my best yall i hope you like what i wrote so far if this gets like a lot of support i will be happy to make a Season 2 and turn this into a manga <3

interesting storyline, I love the plot and it's descriptions. keep it up

Do you wish to read a high quality, relaxing yet stressful, wholesome and romantic story that contains whiplash? Well, you've come to the right place. I've only read the free chapters and this is my 2nd book from author Hansora, and it's really good! The free chapters don't have many face-slapping moments, but the whiplash is beautiful. The story is well-written and the characters' interactions are very smooth. I am throwing this one in my 'Must Continue' folder for now because I am still working on Leslie and Calix's story. But I think I know what to expect when I pick it up: Karma will make a stunning entrance! Regardless of my review, test the waters and see if you like the story 👍