chapters are short and filled with info's.  everything else is good. add R18 on chapters if it have R18 scene

continue continue and continue working good fictions.

The chapter one is amazing I love the way you balance humour and seriousness... I will reading i want to see more PS why were they taking off their clothes 🤣🤣🤣

It made me laugh many times, only read 5 chaps, its the best, you should give it a try

writing quality is goodpacing is perfectstory devlopment os goodworld background well I guess too early to comment on that but so far so goodI rate this novel 9.5/10

"Hey [Failed genius], HUGE congratulations on publishing your first book! I'm beyond thrilled for you!Your hard work and dedication have finally paid off, and I couldn't be more proud of you! Your book is going to inspire and captivate so many readers.Now, I have a special request for you... In your next book (because I know there will be many more!), can you please add a character named after me? It would be an absolute honor!Once again, congratulations on this incredible achievement! Can't wait to read your book and celebrate with you!"

Really incredible story of enemies to lovers that has a bearable, perfect slow burn that’s quite adorable to read about! Characters are excellent, love the back and forth between them and how the small misunderstandings between them aren’t dragged out for years; everything is incredible and it’s one of the better Yuri novels I’ve read!Keep it up with the amazing story!

Die Geschichte erinnert mich an ein anderes buch, das ich gerade lese. Das offene ende des erstens Teils erhöht die Spannung und macht mich sehr neugierig auf den zweiten Teil. Bin sehr neugierig, was noch im späteren verlauf der Geschichte passieren wird😊

This novel / fanfic is average. Starting is not good with world building and very slow pace but he is trying to make it better in later half.This is story for those who like to explore different types of Pokemon worlds , especially in the old era. I have read some really great ones sadly they stopped releasing for some reason.You can skip some chapters also if you find too slow pacing will not make any impact in the story that much for earlier chapters.Author should rewrite them if he gets time.Release is also slow as if he works for 5 days a week.Author should like this review if you are reading it.

nice story i love it!i recommend all of you guys to read it.I am just waiting for new chapters.Overall, the story is very good and the way of saying it is also very good.

Wow. Xyrine is on another level hahah. i hope this story will update again tomorrow, and daily. I really like assassin story. Thank you for the update, author.

This is quite captivating and detailed. I love it so far, so I will keep reading. Good work author.