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yulric564
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- July 1,2024
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So much fun to read. I like the female Mc. She's very funny and cool. Good job author. I will support. More chapters please. Te update is a bit slow.
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Hello, here is Ory, the author. First of all, I don't know how this story is going to turn out, but I see a lot of rather cliché stories on the internet and I'm trying to innovate with this one, so I'm trying to do my best :)So, what's the story about: Well, it's about a boy named Shin who wants to find his sister who mysteriously disappeared 5 years ago in an event that changed Shin to the core.Is there romance? Yes, but no harem.As for the pace of publication, I'll try to do 1 chapter a week, maybe more (I'm not full time), except when I have more free time when I'll publish more, so add the book to the library. If you have any questions or suggestions, you can put them in the comments, I'll try to answer. Also, this story is translated from English by myself so if you see any errors please let me know
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if you shut your brain off it'll be a good story but when you notice how some of this stuff makes zero sense it jus kills your mood. 1. the power scaling is legit horrible like he didnt even think anything out. for some strange reason they are B ranks and in additon to that B ranks in this novel are like S ranks in others also this ranking system goes into like XX which isnt bad but the only reason they go that far is because the author is adamant about having B rank charachters also the mc reaches the novel mc's level reltivley quick and gets a affinity really quick as well and also has two systems that say the same thing so why cant he just have had his orignal system merge with the new system? 2. For some strange reason they fight proffesers which wouldnt be bad but the author uses this chance to introduce other charachters. Its not bad to use cliches cus theres a reason they use them. For example the entrence exam cliche " First Years do tests, fight each other or fight second years that are lower ranking" because obviously this academy wants to see how they do to the lower ranking former first years why would they if the proffesers are XX rank they wouldnt need to fight the students themselves to see how good they are. 3. He introduces so much charachters so quick and doesnt really even introudce someone fully first he jus dashes and goes to the next person.4. He jus gets power ups for no reason???? He gets the cliche no emotion skill fine, but also is out cold for a week where apperntly no one inclduing his very loving mother doesnt contact him at all?? they are super super rich so why doesnt she have somsone watching him why would this rich family leave their son alone and with no body guards it makes no sense. Also has the cliche average mc but his whole family is very attractive so how is he the only average one. I'll keep reading but i doubt ill spend money on this i personally think the author should rewrite this novel and fix the pwer scaling and some of the plot holes as well
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It's time to enjoy another action-packed novel like the other two.
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Shameless author here to give myself 5 stars , and please, if you have any questions or feedback, don't be afraid to share. Anyway, I'm off to write the next couple of chapters. See ya! 👋.
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Well... not for sissies. Pure lemon, deception, ntr, etc. . .
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The new chapter is fun, wonderful and very bloody. What a great chapter. Give me the atmosphere of Lovecraft's novel Dreams in the Witch's House. Well done. Keep writing boy
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I LOVE world-building, but it felt too short—almost like reading a Chinese manhwa! just a joke
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have yet to read it (as there are only 4 chapters out as of now lol) but I love the author and their other works and hate that the only other review is a one star from someone who says they "hate the witch that helps others (for free?)" like what? you read the synopsis, no? you should've known about that already..... sigh
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Good Storyline, plot and the chapter are small.👍🏻✨️
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"The contrast between Ethan’s arrogance and Emily’s grounded nature made for an interesting dynamic. I also loved the friendship with Anna and the loyalty of John. A solid, enjoyable read."
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Look for an author who wouldn't rate his book five stars 😂. You might be confused about the world background but it's just a normal world... nope, a world where The Chronal Disruption has taken place!
I shall survive