Slow paced work, but I like the lore  and the way this novel is going, though it would hurt to do a little time skip.

good writing, background, narrating storyline, logic are good thx

This story is so amazing. I never though of reading something but I absolutely love this what an amazing read. I could read it over and over again 😍😍

I like the story and characters. Its nice.Looking forward for more.I liked the Arin character most.Even pin is nice as well there love is so cuteGood luck

I see great prospect in this novel but, I hope you put " " during conversation and ' ' during the mind conversation to identify which is talking with mouth and talking in mind.The other novel is good too, just maybe, put this [ ] when system is issuing task, achievements, and promts. So that the paragraphs are more organized and make it easy to read.

I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

the early chapters got so much description and adjective And you're repeating sentences and thoughts, though I'm intrigue from the story you're making, keep up the good work

A Very Nice Story with Strong Starting and PlotAnd The Word structure is Litnice Jobthe first Chapter Got Me Hooked

This story is such a rare find! The dynamic between the FL and ML is so balanced, and they both have such strong, compelling personalities. It’s refreshing to see characters like these. I can’t wait to see how the hidden mission shakes things up—it feels like the tension is about to skyrocket.

At chapter 24 right now, and so far, so good. As someone who read your first book, you've definitely improved by a LOT! I love the relationship between Adeline and Enzo and how he's always getting on her nerves one way or the other, but in a cute way😂 I totally recommend you all give this book a try✨️

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