I love your story😁 I've only read the first 4 chapters so far, and it's really nice. One suggestion I have is for you to re check the other parts, as some of them seem to be rewritten.🙃

decent book, pretty interesting and I like it.

Hello! Shameless Author review here.If you've been a fan of showbiz and entertainment novels and want to take a break from heavy fantasy stories, then this story might be for you!Just a disclaimer:  The system is just a helper. Though our MC has a system, he'll still need to rely on his talents and hard work.If you have any questions, just drop them in the comments below, and I'll try my best to answer.Thank you!

Author here, I just want to thank all of you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.Also this is my first work so the starting chapter quality is not definitely the best but I am improving myself with each chapter so you freely can give it a try, the story is getting good as I am finding writing really enjoying... also after this arc I am gonna refine the whole work but don't worry the content is not gonna change just going to adjust minor cliches and repetitive sentence...Thanks for reading.

Chapters read: 36The beginning of the story felt like a twist of the Hunger Games on a larger scale, with different places and districts sending their young children. It feels like a world of survival of the fittest among mages where only those who show no mercy towards their enemies survive for long. It's definitely not a happy go lucky, magical unicorns and laughter kind of mage story.I like that Wizards, apprentices and those stepping into the wizarding world don't have to have a wand to cast spells. There are magic tools, but one's power is more innate and doesn't revolve around a wand. I enjoyed the story and binge read. Regardless of the review, do a taste test and see if the story is to your liking or not

I'm really trying my best in making the story interesting.  But I'm sure that the story is really interesting and enjoyable with enough character development, world background and so on

Solid writing and strong world building. Love thee way the story iss being laid out. I especially love Kaelion’s personality, as well as his banter with Lyraea. The intensity of Lyraea's encounter with Mara? Top tier stuff 👏.

it's nice but iIthought it'd will be sci-fi all the way

Writing quality can be better without the shortcuts of words sometimes. Words like nvm and btw just feels wrong when reading a book. Ik its easier and all that and everyone understand the meaning but it just feels wrong and could take down a lot in quality.Story development is to early to say something about at the moment. Character design is good about a 4 star id say. Explanations about characters could be made better, but overall design is quite good.The world building is also too early to say much about. The world building is a slow subject that should take time and many chapters that you dont have at the moment😅 Good read id say but could be better. Ik you want to make the best book you can and i hope you can make a much better storyline in the future when i come back for a reread. Hope you make a great book author.

The starting of the story is interesting bad boy and transfer girl. Good mix of humour and romance. Good work keep up.

It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.

Good story. Captivated from the first few chapters.