Equivale: Finding His Heart - Book two

seeing there are so many 5 star fake reviews might as well rate it 1 star because i already know what to expect from the story if a story is full of 5 star fake review it's most definitely TRASH

Firstly to begin with the title, it states the thing clearly which is inside, of course that is cultivation. But it exceeded my expectations as the MC isn't a destitute dude who is in dire need to cultivate to gain a reputation as it mostly happens in such books. Secondly what makes it more different is the crafting of MC Zhu Long, who isn't a weakling since the very beginning which is the common cliche of such plotlines, instead he is living well with his other abilities. Quoting the plotline furthermore, the author did a good job while starting with the tinge of mysterious mark, and the certainties are kept upto the chapters, that I didn't even bother to read the chapter titles, and couldn't keep my eyes off the prose. As to conclude it ISN'T A CLICHE CULTIVATION thing, I've read many books in this genre but there was only till now that I found completely UNIQUE in true sense regarding the list of magical fantasy. This will remain in my library from now as it is different for sure in the huge pile of cultivation.Lastly criticising about the narration style, I'd like to make a few things before you step over the author with your ire. It happens when you are binge writing that authors couldn't point out their own blunders, I admit that there are a few errors regarding unnecessary switching of the tenses and punctuation but the plotline will keep you hooked badly that readers can close their eyes to such flaws, they won't cause any hindrance to the flow of reading. I'd like to sum up my review by stating the quality, author has a define style when it comes upto the enhancing and effectiveness of the dialogues, the world is crafted out very beautifully that you can get the whole image of the cliff and the surrounding bushes, along with the other residents. There are heaps of books under cultivation theme but what makes this one different is solely based on the presentation of the MC, his soliloquies, thoughts, relationships, urges and wishes along with the other people who are near him. Most of the authors in this genre fail to touch the depth of the MC, and a reader couldn't get closer in understanding the MC, and questions bearing WHY remains unsettling which drags down the story and results in the failure. As others stated that this book is not comparable to other top ones, I'd honestly say that author will get it to the top soon, as he will improve gradually.

At this moment, the six elders from the Cleansing Incense Ancient Sect had all been gathered. Even though they were old, their blood energies were still as apparent as a rainbow with bright lights surrounding their bodies.

The horde of Blue Ants approaching slithered and crawled over one another to form the bizarre formation of a Blue Ant Wave.

     "Its the perfect place for him.  I have written a letter which will help explain everything."

Making way down to their inn, they also bought a couple more supplies before passing through a blacksmith and requesting some reparations to their weapons and armors, the previous battle left their equipment in a sad state, a testament to the intensity and the number of enemies they had to battle.

Just gonna put this here, hope you all enjoy the Novel. It's pretty interesting and I hope everyone gives it a suitable chance haha. Have a Good Day!

I am loving it so far.... can't wait for more chapter ....