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ntww12
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Writing quality is not that bad, however There are many instances Of Repeated paragraphs and pages 9-15 have what seems like entire pages copy pasted with little changes. the parts that are not copied arent bad. i only read to pay Wall and decided not to continue due to this.
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Here are a few things you should know about this book.Regardless of what kind of reader you are—you will be obsessed.If you don’t get addicted to this book, it’s not mine.✔ Smutty Readers? The tension, the heat? It starts slow… but by Chapter 30, it will ruin you.✔ Weak-to-Strong Readers? Watch as power shifts, battles unfold, and survival is anything but guaranteed.✔ System Readers? Fantasy Readers? The world-building is insane. Magic, power, and an underworld unlike anything you’ve seen.✔ Action & Adventure Readers? The fights are brutal. The stakes are real. The journey will leave you breathless.✔ Dark Romance Readers? The Devil himself will own you. Luciel isn’t just dominant—he’s a nightmare you’ll beg for.And trust me, whatever genre you love, this book has it all.
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Honestly this book is perfect for me, Every thing is great, writing quality, world, character dept, I love it all, keep up the good work author.
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The novel is very wonderful, without any exaggeration.You feel that the novel does not focus on any character exactly, but on the development of the family. There is no system or anything illogical.Cheating is not exaggerated.The quality of the writing is not amazing, but it is very acceptable for an author who is not a native speaker.Continue, I look forward to the next chapters
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Richard_Purba rated it System Reset
May 11,2025
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Ok, this book gives me a little bit of my vampire system vibes and shadow slave, but there are a lot of different things about this book, like the flowers, and the type of abilities in this book is not like the typical abilities in other books
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Richard_Purba rated it A Gorgeous White (BL)
May 11,2025
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everyone who likes this book should also read villain retirement. i think both books are very good. if you don't have anything left to read then you should read villain retirement. it's incredibly good
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Richard_Purba rated it The Pendant of Mars
May 11,2025
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Interesting but short, would really prefer if the chapters extended. A female lead as a hacker, 🤭😍 can't wait to explore
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Another great start to a story by Zephon. I'm glad that he's taking his time this time when it comes to the story. A lesson learned from the mistakes of his other novel no doubt!I wasn't expecting it to be a cultivation story, but it's a welcome surprise in my opinion as long as the wuxia novel tropes stay at a minimum.
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       Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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Richard_Purba rated it (Don'T Read Old)
May 11,2025
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although the work has sensitive themes, it is very good, it has an interesting plot, and it has a lot of potential if the Author doesn't get lost along the way.
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lovely so far, female mc is not my thing tho
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ey some of u may not like the early chapters (especially me cuz this reminds me of 'Reincarnated as the Villainess' Son' and my reading status on that novel is on a On and Off status cuz i just can't endure the MC's pitiful life) but this story? is good as a Fried Chicken cooked by your Mom, like at first I found it annoying that the MC is like well suffering (cuz he reminds me of myself back then😥) but as the story goes, I started to enjoy it though there are times where i cringed reading a dialogue or paragraph. Btw author if you read this, keep up the good work man, it's alright if you can't upload everyday you can just stock up some chapters and release them one by one if you have a free time and also Love the story man👍
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