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it's good story the game that he created and the story about someone who play the game is good and was pretty immersive

This novel has a much better synopsis than the other one (soccer/football related) . I hope this gets published first.At the moment it's last in the race we need more supporters.

I'm about 20 chapters in as is my limit for every novel on seeing whether i will continue reading it and gauging its overall quality. I'm really liking the mixed genre of the novel and how there are so many possibilities towards growth and development. everything from Sci-fi to magick seems possible. the MC is lamentable at times though, his personality isn't very believable and can seem extremely immature. for being a prisoner he sure is lighthearted... i know he's only suppose to be 19, and that he no longer has his past memories but seeing such child like thoughts coming from him can grow annoying quickly. (is supposed to have regressed but some how knows how to be witty and talk back to the guards? lacks decorum and common sense but remembers non-sense such as actors and short phrases?)i feel like this novel could be a stellar 5 star novel if the author spent more time rereading the work for mistakes (as most of them can be easily found if the extra time was spent) and if the fourth wall wasn't broken at all. this novel really has the opportunity to be phenomenal if the serious undertones wouldn't keep getting disturbed mid flow. you have this novel that talks about the lives of others as if they're nothing and how rape and murder could happen around any corner, then out of no where (insert half remembered words or phrases. insert breaking the fourth wall.) it just completely lessens the overall quality of the novel. if author chose to rewrite this without so much nonsense and fourth wall breaking this could easily make it to the front page for weeks to come. best of luck to the author though, I'll continue to read it for a while longer to see how the author develops everything...

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it was trash, author repeats words really often, for some reason he loves this woman who is meant to be his mother who he has spent 3 days with and is already basing his future plans around her, for some reason he "doesn't know what the sacred mark actually is" and loads of other basic **** when his dad used to be one of the 9 emperors who ruled kunlun, he gets into arguments and cares WAYYYYY to much about the queen and 8th prince, when his old status was sooooo much higher than them that theirs no reason he should care about them so much they are his motivation to improve

One of my favorite books I've read on here so far❤️ I absolutely adore the main character and the focus on his mental state in the earlier chapters and I'm very very excited to see where the relationships go

I don't normally read novels that talk about multverse but I found the plot of this interesting and I liked the character of Mc, from what I could read I saw that he will have a good construction of the world, already add the collection

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