the story stsrt like slow but when you read it it not feel like ery good but it little good if you just read it once more and always give a review after reading it and it help me to write a better story and thanks foe support me

A very interesting piece. Makes your reasonate well with the MC It will be great if you make the chapters longer☺️☺️

Pretty cool like the outlines of story the slow world building and plots . Definitely  attached to crash urge , still wondering what pair stands for? Is it just pair ?

Bro keep it up... As a bengali i understand those emotions"luchi and aloo torkari.."sealdah bhir station""... Keep going brother.. Keep going

i love how you write the story and the character development! expecting more!!!!🩷🤍:D

Fairly decent, enjoyable book. I have to disagree with some of the other reviews, though. It certainly isn't a masterpiece. That being said, It does have potential, especially if the author focuses more on edits and proofreading. His name is inconsistent. There is a full paragraph in one of the more middle chapters that is a directly copied ChatGPT response, which was a bit of a surprise. If the author steps up the editing and makes sure to keep the story itself smooth sailing like it is till chapter 25 so far, it has serious potential.

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Okay I'm gonna go ahead and say it, this book is insane (insanely good 😊) the setting, characters and the plot everything is just so amazing, this is officially my favorite. i love 💕😘 it.

It's not amazing; it has its flaws but also potential. I like the theme of vampires and supernatural creatures, although there aren't many stories in this theme that I enjoy. I'll give it a chance, even though the writing is a bit weak. I hope the updates are at least regular. The point-of-view issue bothers me a little, but I don't think it's a big problem.

This novel is so refreshing. Please update more, author 🥹🥹🥹

Well, it involves the seven sins. This is quite a big story theme. I hope for the author to pull it through. Great job so far with the characters. 👏👏👏

Really loving the story so far. Adding to my library🔥🎉😍