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KVCD13LG
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to much AI in this bro needs to stop even if is causes the Chapters to take longer
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Shameless author: please kindly leave your likes or comment here for more chapters !
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nice story but i wish the author made it more movie like cuz i'm getting movie vibes
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Is it dropped it have updated 4 months
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The writing is amazing this author has incredible flow and a unique story telling style. I'm sure this story will stand out from the crowd in this genre as this author gives us more chapters. Can't wait! Kudos to you author!
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I really enjoyed The story is , emotional, and the characters are well-developed. The world-building is but overall, it was a great read.I especially liked [favorite part of the book], though I feel like mention a minor issue if any could be improved. Still, I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys . Looking forward to more!
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Masterpiece. This novel is a true literary gem that captivates from the very first pages and leaves a lasting impression. The author masterfully creates an immersive atmosphere, bringing the characters to life and drawing the reader into their world. Each scene is rich with emotion, and the writing is vivid and expressive, making the reading experience truly engaging.The plot unfolds smoothly yet keeps you intrigued, prompting deep reflection on important life themes. The characters feel real, with their joys, doubts, and inner struggles. They donโt just exist on the pagesโthey step out of the book and become close to the reader.This novel is both inspiring and thought-provoking, leaving a warm and lasting impression. Itโs one of those stories youโll want to return to, just to relive the magic the author has created. Highly recommended for those who appreciate profound and heartfelt narratives.
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I enjoyed the first couple chapters, then the story kept going downhill, - inconsistent characters- everyone from the main characters to the top government officials acts and talks like middleschoolers.- MC is a pretty stupid despite being portrayed to be calculating and "smart"- The author is trying too hard to make it seem that the world is hopeless.- after one event around the chapters 50s (an event that was avoidable if the mc or anyone around him actually had something resembling a working front lob) MC turned completely to a proper insufferable emo.Overall the story was bad, the promise the author gave us with the first few chapters was relatively broken, this no longer was a "misunderstanding" novel.
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Overall score of 0.6, mainly because the story is clearly AI writing. There are several times in the beginning chapters that are sectioned off by titles as if given a prompt and told to go with it and the author just copied and pasted the chapter without taking out the sub-headers meant to address user-entered prompt for topics intended to be entered into the chapter. There are several times the writing loops back to an already mentioned section or characters repeating themselves or others like other AI-written stories tend to do, especially when it comes to exposition to explain certain reasoning or for why the Main Character is doing something as if the AI is for exposition prompted. At some point the author leaves in bullet points. If you're Interested in AI-written stories that are rushed and pushed out as quickly as this, enjoy. I just wished there was an AI tag for forced on books like this.
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Best novel I ever read. Totally underrated. Deserves more readers and better rating.๐ซถ๐ซถ๐
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Good Novel with great potential.Nice System.
A Luna and four Alpha