The Last Step

Ok the review is till chapter 33.Writing quality -5story development- 4 ( Till now, there's no specific storyline and the MC just wants to become strong so that he isn't being played under fate and how powerless he was to change his condition prior his transmigration.The MC doesn't gets much pumped or angry after the typical engagement break plot. So far, the plot is progressing but there's no definite or specific storyline which alignes with MCs goal.      That maybe because only 33 chapters has been released.-Not much clichés and regular tropes, if there are, they barely go beyond one chapter.Character design-4 ( MC only wills to not be a pawn where he can't control anything.So far, being an orphan prior the transmigration, he had to work to feed himself making him quite headstrong and look on the poor side of the earth.Now that hes in a cultivation world, he can gauge what needs to be done when and how accordingly.He hasn't shown much toxic behavior except a typical poison MC tongue.   Update stability -5 ( The more the better but the novel is in it's infant stage so only authors know when and how much to post. So far, decent pace.World background- 4 ( So far, there's not much description on world background except the 'cultivation world' is entirely in a different space, meaning, there's a barrier between the commoner world and cultivation world. The barrier is on an high altitude where one can't reach it until they can fly and enter it.Besides that, there's only introduction on one sect which makes it hard to gauge how wide the world is. Definitely larger than our earth though.  Mc has a golden finger which he himself can't figure out it's origin but it's pretty much OP but it works depending on MCs cultivation level.I have read the mainstream Chinese novels that are on novel updates and ********** and I have big hopes for this novel. I haven't done a review before but loved the novel and couldn't refrain from doing it.                                            

This novel had potential but got wasted by a world chat and a lot of stupid things.........................................................................

Pretty bad to be honest. The MC's knowledge of this world isn't very clear at all. I mean we know he has a library with all of his memories from the previous world, but it's not clear if that applies to the previous world or not. The library in question is also pretty nonsensical because the man isn't just reading memories you might expect. Dude seems to have a ludicrously large eclectic and convenient reading history to have stored in there.Dude seems to take some ridiculous risks before really knowing much of anything about magic too. Part of that might be the author's inability to keep his knowledge of this world consistent or the way he acts for that matter. This is only by chapter 7 as well. I can only imagine this will get worse the more the story develops because it will be more stuff for the author to try and keep track of.

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Finally, I managed to found a worthwhile farming novel to read. Love the HM reference for the chickens. Put a smile on my face. Keep up the good work. Just a note and you may already know this. The official successor to Bokujo Monogatari is Story of Seasons. The HM Lights of Hope is no longer bokujo. SoS may be another outlet of inspiration for you.

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There were some non-cliche parts, such as the female lead being so direct with her feelings, which is kinda fresh. However it still has alot of fillers.

It is vampire= ⭐It has chaotic evil mc= ⭐Great writing quality= ⭐Interesting plot and world= ⭐No harem, No romance= ⭐This a 5 star review my friend. A masterpiece for evil lovers like me. Keep up the good work.