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it's quite good, some of the first chapters has spelling mistakes, but the new chapter has everything, you're improving keep up the great work, also, the world building has improved:)

For a system novel, this was pretty unique. no level up stuff to be found, and i still don't see the "omni" part of the system yet but its too early in the story ig.usually harem and system together you would expect op mc who wins every fight and is the best without doing jackshet but this one is different. Mtfk deadarse shows mc as a 5 year old kid being literally brutalized and having his hands, veins, organs being destroyed by flok of "birds." cant make this shet up.I recomend give this one a try. it does have potential compare to other system trash novels.

It stars of great and and there is potential in this story. hopefully this continues to update. Also mc starting of as a kid and this being omni harem system, i guess you shouldn't really expect r18 stuff from this novel for a long while.

I think reading this was not  a bad decisio, I have been reading online till now so this is really my first time from signing in the app and reading and it's worth it

Editing my initial review. Lyla, the female lead is from a powerful family. I bet you can guess what happens next. Yup. She has a potential future engagement and of course our MC isn’t strong enough to go up against her family yet. Also bc of the mc’s very nature, he is an automatic enemy once they learn of his irl powers. So bc Ethan is currently a weakling, Lyla goes back to her family without really telling him anything and she left while he was on a mission. So, not only will we probably have to endure long separation, but she literally left without saying anything. Ethan had to continually call her before she was allowed to answer. I hate this trope, it is seriously overused and I’d rather there not be “romance,” than have to trudge through this nonsense once again 😩

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coming after reading the chapter and all i can is topnotch tbh😘 really love the way you write it..

So far, I've read up to 4 Chapters! It's an easy and ultimately FUN read. It has a nice premise too!Please give it a try, you'll love it! Recommend!

Please update the remaining chapters  !!! I know it's mtl but we need it 🥲🥲

too many time skips and many things happened without explanation, the writing and narrative is so good that I got hooked, I'll trust the artificial process till the 100th chapter before giving the review.Till now it's good and worth your time.

Noice !!