This novel has the perfect balance of action, romance, and mystery! I’m hookedThe chemistry between the characters is insane! And the action scenes? Absolute fire

Great character development..Interesting characters..The mc has a good sense of humour 👍👌👌

"One of the best novels I have ever seen. The world-building and characters are absolutely perfect. It may seem similar to many other novels, but the author has clearly left their mark as the chapters progress. I just hope they maintain a stable release schedule."

It’s good just upload more chapters ……….

Well, Google translation with editing, English language from the series,😅 so the novel’s grade is lowered a little🥲. I try as much as possible to amend it after translation. If you happen to find an error,😘 please inform me and I will try to amend it. If the novel is good and I can make money from it🥴, I will have a professional translator do the translation😋. Finally, I want to say, with your support, I gain confidence in producing a better story.❤️

it's pretty good but i think u should add more things to the background. the characters are cool and u are keeping to their design and personalities, but after the mansion incident it seems like u stopped describing the world around the main character and u seem to only focus on the new characters .i am honestly surprised this is ur first work since it's so good . i believe that If u keep this up u can be a great writer in the future

Nice novel😀 I would recommend it to fantasy lovers😁

W story, cant wait for what youre gonna write next 🔥🔥, loving the chemisrty between the characters and the world building, already gained a fan!

Worst charecter developement. Like after knowing about soul corruption he and his sister became good and later in elven kingdom he despises her(worst).while at lupivores incident he finally took a step towards his mother but same again despises her. Worst of it all he forgot about fianna(hope... my ass). Really worst.

story is cool keep going and give steady updates don't drop

The story is original and exciting, but the chapters are a bit too long, try to reduce them in any case I can't wait to see where the story leads

I like the story development and your writing style. Creating an imaginary city is topnotch and I'm getting to know the characters too. But give us more twists. Good work so far.👍