Hook 🪝, line & sinker . Now could you update the book 📖

Very good story so far. Nice writing. Will keep reading. Thanks.

It's a really solid work, I like it. The begining chapters do have some depth to them if you're patient enough

You did well. It is quite a great start.

please upload more chapters i love this man please speedup

This novel is good but there are a lot of mistakes in the characters Silas eyes are supposed to be green but they changed to golden brown also Margaret's eyes changed from gray to blue same thing with the hair colors of some characters also Laila's elemental convergence at first it was wind then it became earth then the author said it was earth and wind and in the virtual reality fight she was attacking other students using earth and water there are problems in describing events and abilities what is supposed to mean golden lightning with black fog or in the Physical Assessment when MC's lightning changed from golden to blue then it was described as golden with blue inside it this is a mess in the description does the author use AI in writing the novel I don't want to sound like someone who focuses on the negative side. The author is new and is supposed to accept criticism. This will help him improve and make the novel more enjoyable. I would like to say that the novel is good, but I hope that the author corrects the mistakes in the future.

Hi guys, it's the Author here shamelessly giving the first review😂I've been plotting this book for sometime now and finally had the courage to post it. And I definitely hope you'll like it xD it would mean a lot!! So yeah this is basically Elliot on his journey from a weak to strong mage along with a possessive Demon Lord as a husband and a one in a million system dungeon....So join him on this journey of navigating his life with the threatening impending doom that threatens to destroy the mortal realm.I really hope you enjoy this book and if you do please support me with gifts, powerstones, and golden tickets they'll help a lot and as a reward I'll realease extra chapters.꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡

Great book and I'll definitely catch up with rest of the story,  wanna see how it all unfolds.

phenominal story amazing fights the emotions with his fiance cuaght me of guard i literally felt it the power system is good keep up the good work and dont disapoint me plx

Highly recommend! And that's not saying enough. Very well written and descriptive, especially the worldbuilding. I'm going to enjoy this ride.

This is just perfect and the setting and details are just  oh my I can't put it into words

Great novel, story unfolds itself satisfying and author's writing is captivating. I hope story continues like this I love long series where characters and storylines merge together.